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The Honeymoon\'s Over

by lunchboxbrain
The Honeymoon\'s Over

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Submitted by lunchboxbrain on August 8, 2006

There\'ll be no spooning tonight.

jock05tees

juvenile! (0)

Maurissa

I like it but I think the bed is too big. It takes the focus off of their facial expressions.

UpsideDownTreeCult

Maybe make it so you can tell the difference between the man and the woman, unless they are gay, which then I don't know.

lunchboxbrain
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Don't label the spoons people. Just enjoy them for what they are.

avalanchelynn

hahaha it's chocolate for me :)

Rebecca Jane

I didn't get that the were spoons at first. I thought they were just really simplistic people.
Maybe if you could make it more obvious? Or have them in a kitchen drawer or something.

ohyoustealher

^ I like that idea. Make the bed into a drawer and it will make more sense

Loewe

A little smaller please

Liberaltarian

Look more like cotton swabs than spoons -- work on your shading. :)

lunchboxbrain
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Keep those tasty comments rolling in...

ashby

very cute concept (love the title) but I agree that its hard to tell theyre spoons. maybe make the spoon heads bigger, add more shadding, and make the bed smaller.

adity99

NOT juvenile! SO TRUE! great idea! but resize it a bit smaller.

tatert0t

agree about the spoons not being clear, but with this style, it might be hard to fix. Maybe use a few different shades of grey to make the spoon-bowl clearer....

surreal_blue

that's not juvenille.. it's actually sort of funny.

mahatma_blondie

I didn't get the spoon thing until I read your/the first comment. But once I got that I liked it. . .maybe instead of annoyed the spoon can look sad/disappointed with a thought bubble reading sigh

randomeight

Funny, I got that they were spoons immediately.

Although I do think the suggestion of a drawer instead of a bed is worth exploring... I agree with the poster who said the size of the bed pulls the focus away from their expressions.

herophelia

i also couldn't tell they were spoons. if you know they're spoons, it's very funny, so please find some way to convey very clearly that they are, in fact, flatware

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