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by keesj
Moving forward

About the design

Submitted by keesj on August 6, 2006

Open to your own interpretation.

lantru

interesting 4

keesj
keesj profile pic Artist

Thanks for your comments!

homsar42

but it's...so...small. i'm not spending $17 on a shirt with a design that tiny.

Accidental Amusement

I have to agree with homsar. Definitely not worth my $17.

Aisea

Love the idea.

keesj
keesj profile pic Artist

I tried a larger arrow but I really didn't like it. And adding more stuff wouldn't work because that would make it too complex I think. (simplicity is one of the key elements in this design)

Any ideas how to improve it? Thanks for the comments.

bloatbugjen

reminds me of when i watched some guy do DDR on like, insane mode or whatever it is. he got a B+ i think.

hardoush

ha ddr

podium_06

done before but much better...

Al Veryard

It a cool idea mate, but it needs to be bigger and more prominent on the tee. I love the simplicity of Icon work, it can be so bold and strong.

artgeek17

make it larger and put it in the top right corner... on the shoulder.

artgeek17

or at least make it bigger...

keesj
keesj profile pic Artist

@podium_06,
Where have you seen this before?

fransmalone

i agree with homsar too. if it was HUGE and in the center, it'd be $5.

atomic child

is that some old nintendo code for contra...lol

kkjelden

Simple but I like it a lot. $5

thINK

I like the idea

lovelover

It's okay... but there's a fine line between simple and "blah".

heartattackss

its a cool idea, but it'd be better if the colors were more appealing or the design was like... huge.

Mylo

cool

jingo788

nice and simplistic. but for $17 i want something much more intricate and nice.

premierplayr

like it... it would wear it if the design was bigger and it the center of the shirt.

TehBohoLuffer

When I first saw it, I thought of DDR.
I like the placement, but not the size. Too small.

bradleyadita

agree with fransmalone... + this:
(1) it works ok how it is... but
(2) you could put it in the center and make it larger i think that would be better, but off to the side is cool too, cuz its just there.. like not in no ones face, ya know
(3) you could make all the arrows point in the opposite direction... of the direction of the main arrow... (also for consistency, and repetition, you should make the big image of the arrow be the dimensions of the smaller ones... only larger... i think right now there is a discrepeny between them..)

the way it is right now is actually a visual representation of a document i wrote recently about the phenomenon of "vectorism"
- you can read it on my FOE account...
link
it's called...
"the vectorist womanifesto"
it's cann

bradleyadita

p.s. thats my interpretation
:D:D

HYPHY
  1. but still nice.
keesj
keesj profile pic Artist

thanks for all your suggestions and feedback

@bradlyeyadita
3. I think it would kinda cheesy to point them all the opposite direction.. I think this form has more style to it and can more (interesting) interpretations

I tried to make the "big arrow" the same form as the smaller one but somehow it never looked quite right so I just submitted this one

Thanks for the link, I'm always interested in mathematics!


A question: I'm not supposed to alter it user your feedback and resubmit it right?

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