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remove the box and add something else and you got a solid design good work!
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No It's Perfect The Way It Is.... Why Does Everyone Hate Boxes? Whatever... I Want One. $5
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yeh, get rid of the box and it could be a $4 or $5
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the eyes seem just a little off, other than that its perfect. $5
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fools. the box is fine.
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doesn't fit the title.
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not bad...keep submitting
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Thank you.
I tried a circle, but it felt like a void on my chest. My dad wanted a triangle. And I like triangles But I didn't like it much. Oh well. :] |
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The box is fine, I love the birds! :)
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awesome. box = yes!
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oh man, i love it.
at first it looked like a tree, and then the face popped out at me. brilliant. |
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The box works with this one- well done- sans box this design would be too flat. I like your style- 5$
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the profile (of the face), particularly the nose/mouth is very cute.
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That's a really great idea. It kinda twists your mind.
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REMOVE THE BOX!!
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I'm kind of confused about the box issue, actually.
:\ Oh well. We shall see. |
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I really love this! I like the how she runs off the box a lot. 5$
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amazing!
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love it
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thINK on Aug 12 '06 Hey, cool!
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Heh heh.
Leave more comments whether +/-. They make my day. :] |
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I say leave the box. And yes, it DOES fit the title if you read the designers description and look closely at the design, eldertreemother :o)
Nice work for your first submission! |
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very, very nice illustration! :)))
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I'm digging this, but I'd like to see it on a different color shirt... Not a big fan of the ol' skoo M&M (before they changed it to blue) tan color.
That'd be cool if they actually printed it on brown so that it was just a shadow effect, kind of like how they put black ink on a black shirt on Ctrl+Z. In any case 5$! |
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5$
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Sassmo:
That was my original intent. Heh heh, I did the shirt with the dark brown colour as the Tee, but then I remembered that I have to choose a t-shirt colour from the list [I was in a deplorable state!]. I suppose you could choose a different t-shirt colour and make that the colour of the shadows and then just choose a lighter shade of that colour for the face. Any suggestions? |
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more contrast between the skintone/hair and the shadow region..
i think the rectangle could work... the neck/shoulder/upper body lines are almost lost entirely... |
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it took me a while to see the whole picture but neat.
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keep the box.
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I think this is gorgeous... I really really really like the colors and the art and the box thing that some crazy people have a problem with and the placement and everything... it's great!
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radCore, i love it.
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I love your style! I'm not sure about the shoulders/neck part though. While you can see it in the close up, on the shirt it seems lost, which makes the shadow on the left shoulder look like some weird branch growing out of her chin.
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KEEP THE BOX
This is PERFECT as is - love it!!! |
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Beautiful
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Anonymoose: Thank you for kind words! But maybe -she- is just a weird branch. I'm not entirely sure. Your words will be taken into account in my black book [Not an evil cannotation either!]. Thanks again! :]
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i think this is a beautiful illustration. the box is fine. i would like to see more colors. nice work!
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i like it the way it is. nice job!
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$5
we probally saw the same girl. i wanted to be like her too i love it the way it is. i dont know why but the profile reminds me of jazz... |
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couldn't see the face there until I read your comment...
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i think i'd like the box better if it were a slightly different color. nice though!
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took me a while to figure out what the design was but then suddenly it was like OH DUH
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cbuchholz on Aug 16 '06 I love it! The facial expression is great, and the box gives it a good sense of depth. I'd like to see more designs posted by archbar!! :) 5$$$
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i like it, but it needs some more color, or some more distinction, i like that the two shapes fade into eahc other, but there needs to be a little but of more pop between them.
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LEAVE THE damn box, mabye hollow it out or play with it somehow, mabye. i like. but iwouldn't wear being that im not a black girl
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Absolutely Stunning! I insist you do more! 10$$$!!!
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Enjoy, please?
If not, I am a glutton for criticism. :D
This is my first submission. It came out too little.
I don\'t know anything on how to make it not so little. :]