First submission, tell me whats good, and what sucks

Not saying could do betterBut. Is it just a VW or is there more to that I am missing?

Volkwagen bus! awesome! it's kind of hard to see, and i feel like there should be a peace sign somewhere on it. still a 4 though.

yellow blows

put it on blue and its $5

the yellow's a bit too bright for me

Would you mind going with another color for the shirt?

agree w/ yellow on blue, that makes it a 4 -- may need a bit more definition in the wheels as well.

No peace sign.

I like how it floats on the color, yellow too bright, try to match it to the classic VW colors, but keep the floating part

great negative shape design...

There were already a lot of VWs made for this competition. I really like the use of negative space in this one, but the shadow bugs me a little bit. It should be under the car or stetched really long for the sun to hit it that way. As it is though, the shadow takes over the design too much.

i saw many awesome designs on sunshine competition, if want to win, one have to really submit a very impressive design to on par with them. thats wat i call challenging i guess. nice try anyway!

I actually like this on yellow.