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Cardial Capacity (resubmission)

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I took all of your advice & changed this up a little. Let\'s try this again.
Al Veryard
Al Veryard on Aug 08 '06
Didn't see this before pal, so im not sure what it looked like. But I like the style and the mood. It will be in my basket if it goes into production.



Al
OneGoofyGuy
OneGoofyGuy on Aug 08 '06
5$ its really cool

id wear it!
augusttremulous
augusttremulous on Aug 08 '06
5$ for sure
rutherfo@hotmail.com
rutherfo@hotmail.com on Aug 08 '06
I'd like it better if the heart was over the heart.
Suthnoli
Suthnoli on Aug 08 '06
It's lovely. Wherever you put it someone's going to want it somehwere else, but I think it looks fine like this.
Heavy Eyeliner
Heavy Eyeliner on Aug 08 '06
Awwww.... I Absolutely Love This... And I Want One For Me... And An Extra For.... Someone... lol $$$$$$$$555555
amy122166
amy122166 on Aug 08 '06
I love it!!! Different positioning on shirt though...like dead center.
clearpepsi
clearpepsi on Aug 08 '06
I like it, would buy it...
<3Monster<3
<3Monster<3 on Aug 08 '06
Yes. $5
MyRedHandprints
MyRedHandprints on Aug 08 '06
amy122166It was originally dead center over a pair of lungs. A lot of people suggested that it be placed in the correct area of the chest cavity & a lot of people didn't like the lungs, so I moved the heart & lost the lungs. rutherfo@hotmail.com that is where your heart is located, half way between where you think it is & the sternum (center).
deadpanfool
deadpanfool on Aug 08 '06
I really like the design's ideas, but I'm worried the text isn't going to be super-legible when printed. But that's probably me.
Madlune
Madlune on Aug 08 '06
the changes are perfect. 5$
therecouldbenothingafterThis
good changes.. i dunno though.. i feel like it's missing something. still a 5.. i'm not sure what to tell you though..
Kramer and Sprenger
Kramer and Sprenger on Aug 08 '06
WE WANT MORE HEARTS!!!!! 3 Cheers for Cardio! hearts mania! I heart hearts!
Obidasin
Obidasin on Aug 08 '06
I love this! I think the only thing that could make it any better is making the heart a little darker. (I dunno, at the brightest #C70000 instead of #ED1B23 or something?)



Excellent, excellent job. $5 and I'll buy it.
Desaparecido
Desaparecido on Aug 08 '06
Great job. I just hope the font will be legible on a shirt.
Jdiehm11
Jdiehm11 on Aug 09 '06
Great job with the changes. Love it x 3.
YBH
YBH on Aug 09 '06
LOVE IT!
Mazy Mallone
Mazy Mallone on Aug 09 '06
I remember this design! And you took out the lungs ... or whatever those things are ... [i still have no idea ... ^.^; ]



but yeah, nice job!
alibob
alibob on Aug 09 '06
stop drawing a heart you fart
MyRedHandprints
MyRedHandprints on Aug 09 '06
Mazy Mallone yeah, didn't you think they were testicles or something? :)

alibobAlright seriously, that's not a comment, that's barely english.
rafael000
rafael000 on Aug 09 '06
nhaaa....



no more heart shirts...
TheTragonDragon
TheTragonDragon on Aug 09 '06
it seems just a tad bit too high, but i like it
hazy_sunday
hazy_sunday on Aug 09 '06
mmm, tasty.
russdonovan
russdonovan on Aug 09 '06
seriously....hearts are really really overdone
jar_bombadillo
jar_bombadillo on Aug 09 '06
Does anyone else see a squirrel in that heart? Look at it carefully, I swear it looks like a squirrel sprawled out. haha.



Like the text.
jar_bombadillo
jar_bombadillo on Aug 09 '06
P.S. "your scent on my pillow" might sound nicer : P
kirksheltonart
kirksheltonart on Aug 09 '06
OMG another heart sub, holy shit i think i hate hearts.



(this is what people said about my heart sub)
evanbaer
evanbaer on Aug 09 '06
The typography and graphics here are very much on.



In white w/ a bloddy red heart, 5$. If the text were a little less cliche...a little less direct..6$+.



Lets talk if it isn't picked up in this pass. I'm all about this shirt.
Dr. Elusis
Dr. Elusis on Aug 10 '06
hate the shirt colors, but love the design.
almost emo
almost emo on Aug 10 '06
hearts are so cliche.

but its a good design

5
ilexwhite
ilexwhite on Aug 10 '06
It's still completely illegible. Think about it- do you want someone standing at your chest deciphering every little cursive word? Not to mention that there are just too many words, period, for a tee. Tees should have as few words as possible; max 3, and preferably, none.
goerikat
goerikat on Aug 10 '06
threadless already has a heart design.

[I like yours better]
myowndior
myowndior on Aug 10 '06
Great design, id buy the grey one :::5:::
1964
1964 on Aug 12 '06
The heart reminds me too much of wordart.
Vivaciousveggie
Vivaciousveggie on Aug 12 '06
Hey! Sooo... if it doesn't win... this tshirt is really hot! Would there be another way to get one?
Smashtastically
Smashtastically on Aug 13 '06
I love this shirt, even the text but I do worry that it might not be very legible once printed, it's pretty small....$5
kat_smudge
kat_smudge on Aug 13 '06
i prefer it like this, rather than the original sub, but the heart still needs to be moved a little across and down to be where you'd anatomically expect it to be - the top of the heart also seems a bit of an odd shape; its probably just from a different perspective or something, but it never looked like that in my anatomy textbooks!
kookie21
kookie21 on Aug 13 '06
agree about the legiblity of the text. but it does suit the mood of the design



I love it though. i'd buy if if my heart wasnt in fact broken.. cos it would have been so true.



GrawritsKasi
GrawritsKasi on Aug 13 '06
omg this is the most awesome shirt ever. i would buy it in a heartbeat.
ashby
ashby on Aug 13 '06
If you could make the text bigger that would be better. Also a different color for the shirt but I cant think of a good sugestion, sorry. I like the design a lot I give it a 5.
MyRedHandprints
MyRedHandprints on Aug 14 '06
I too had concerns about the legibility of the text since it's a delicate font, so I've made it a little bigger. Now it's set at 23 pt. which should be more than sufficient for screen printing. Sorry ilexwhite, but if people stare and you don't want them to tell them that's it's not polite.
post_script
post_script on Aug 14 '06
i want this shirt right now.



$5, without a doubt.
Fwuzzle
Fwuzzle on Aug 14 '06
I'd like it at the same height on the shirt, but centered there. If that makes sense.



...Move it to the the left, basically.



I like though :) Kind of a new play on it
divalim
divalim on Aug 15 '06
this looks way lot better! great!
rockstarr91
rockstarr91 on Aug 15 '06
awesome shirt. i love the deep lables on the heart.
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