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Extensive research has confirmed that really no one even likes the white crayon much at all.
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I recommend four shades of another color, just to avoid anyone (including people that would see someone wearing shirt but not the website) taking it the wrong way.
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I actually thought they were bullets for a minute there.
I like this but I do think it needs to be more obvious that they're crayons. Maybe just highlight one of two of them using colour? |
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maybe you could use the torch light for effect and a dark red or brown shirt - to make the group shades of orange/red or brown
as is - it does look a little wrong :/ |
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i'd like it better if the crayons were all different colors. and maybe the t-shirt colors were different, too. otherwise the design is awesome.
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I agree with nonolarson: Because the white crayon is alone, it is not genocide as much as a hate crime. If a group of hate-filled crayons were ganging up on a group of scared crayons, then maybe.
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Currently this isn't genocide, it's just muder. Add a few more crayons to the victim group and it'd work.
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I think the concept is brilliant, but a few kinks need working out. The colours issue, for one. I'm seeing a lynching more than genocide, too, but the issue is related, so no biggie.
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I know they're supposed to be crayons, but I'm seeing a lynching, too. That's my interpretation, but this design definitely wouldn't go over well in some places.
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White crayons are good for blending. Nice concept, but I think I agree with the others, colours would be better. you don't get a box full of black crayons.
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you're on the edge of some racial undertones. just be careful and cconsider how some would interpret this
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