Whatever we do we are always being control and not normal and always concious about others cos we are all wired by our environment!!!

vibrating dildo?

huh? What is that lump thingy thinglike blob of... What?

I like the idea. I'd buy it if the joystick was clearer.
Now it looks... not like a joystick....

damn, it does look like a dildo. hahah

a man-powered dildo seems somewhat ironic. amirite?

Wrong contest

I like the concept, clean up the joystick or change it so something a little more obvious and you have it.

if it's a chair, it reminds me of the matrix

i think you checked the wrong contest

zoom what huh.

lol, yeah. wrong contest.
xDD

I wonder there are guys who can't diferentiate betwn a dildo and a joystick, educate yourself guys abd for girls anything like a rod will always have mirage of dildo or vibrator keep on thinking if it makes you feel good!!!! And for others who criticize my work construtively are really appreciated and I would always take your suggestion to shrpen my skills. Ciao!!!

It's not very clear that it's a joystick (a very old one, at that), so the differentiation is a difficult one.

Otherwise, beautiful design.

hahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahaa i would still buy it to have people ask "is that a dildo?"

The image is too wide and will be hidden by armpits/ curve of body. Never mind the fact that I have ZERO idea what this is.

If it reads as a dildo, it reads as a dildo, yo.

The problem is that it does not immediately read as a joystick, so you lose the impact of the design.

Everybody act normal? It's really good anyway.

Thanx !! for all the suggestions which is reall helpful to do it better in my next design!!!! Thanx a lot!!!! I really appreciate the way you critisize!!!

oookay, wow I didn't think it looked like a dildo until I read those comments, but whatever, I'd still buy this

$5

I didn't get that it was a joystick right away, maybe tweak that part, then the shirt's awesome.

I was kind actually getting a catiplliar on a stand, type thing.
But that's probably just me.

I like the shirt, I actually had a similar design planned, which I probably won't do now. harhar dang

But yeah. I think you've submitted to the wrong contest.

i could tell it was a joystick, but who uses joysticks anymore :) Still like it alot $4

a good use of horizontals

I am sorry that some people really mess up the comment system

Do you have any other colors or details on your design in you blog? That may help

Yes I do have an option but I put up this cos I thought the main concern was the theme and the execution. So sad no one loves it except for some I'll always treasure their comments!! Anyways thanx a lot for all your comments!! I thought it'd perfect for the theme. God Bless!!

well I totally get it and love it - to me its all about technology controlling people or dictating your actions.

Well illustrated, mate. I'd think about shortening the parallel wires and making the joystick more retro. I used to have one with a boxy base, two big red buttons, and a joystick you had to pinch with your fingers. Everyone loves retro.

Hm...

Perhaps I go too far, but what if the man was dancing (disco, or some other obvious and easy to profile dance style) and the wires went down vertically to a generic videogame controller?

Then I would buy it.

Yeah, too much, I know.

I'd buy it. It's awesome and orig. $5

Hey!! Thanx a lot for reviewing. I really appreciate!!!!

I find it very amusing that the joystick looks like a vibrator. Because what is a vibrator but a stick of joy?
I like the colours here. But, wrong contest.

Love the concept. As many others have said, the joystick does look rather like a dildo. Perhaps a computer instead?

I thought it was a chair, mainly because of the proprtional size. A classic atari joy-stick would have made me think otherwise. It's a pretty sweet design though and I like the color choice. One more thing, it never hurts to "jazz" up the template a bit... a close up could benefit greatly.

P.s. I have my first design here in my blog forum, if you could take some time to critique it, I would appreciate it.

Thax a lot guys for the comment!! As my opinion is concern it's always better to keep the design in stereo stype or double meaning by not giving the cliche' design. It's Always better to design something that would sell throughout the 4 seasons!! So besure to keep the deign a litlle obscure so that the person looking to buy a Tee with dildo design will buy it as well as the person looking out to buy the design with the same theme will also fit the bill! Anyways thanx a lot guys !! Comments are comments!!!

"Yay, I finally found a T-shirt showing a guy hard-wired to a giant dildo caterpillar chair! I've been looking for that for days!" - - Nobody

If you were really going for a joystick in the design, perhaps you should at least make it one that exists, it doesn't necessarily have to be the cliche Atari or PS2 design...

Thanx for the suggestion!!!! You seems to be little frustrated!!! Cool it dude you don't have to explode your frustration on someonelse's comment box!! Coool! Everything is gonna be O.K.!!! Your mental imbalance will disappear soon!!!!! So chill!!!

wow, 21 exclamation points in 7 sentences. I suppose that's better than typing in all caps.

I like the teal on black, BTW. Teal is usually an ugly color (see: every 3rd Ford station wagon in America), but it works well in small quantities. As mentioned earlier, definitely shortening the horizontal lines by about 1/2 would pull the entire design more towards the non-pit area of the shirt. Or you could just make the entire design smaller.