Threadless T-Shirts - Teen Queen

Teen Queen by marlomarizza

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Submitted on:

Jul 24 '06

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47 comments

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1.79 out of 5

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by marlomarizza

This is my first submission to Threadless. All constructive criticism is more than welcome!
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Kojima on Jul 24 '06

Wow! Interesting twist! It's great.

loquacious on Jul 24 '06

I really like the girl but not the card background...fix that and $5.

human_no110289 on Jul 24 '06

very nice!

amaliaslash on Jul 24 '06

i agree with loquacious entirely!

Catsgame on Jul 24 '06

I really love the illustration, however I don't really think the boxes work well.

Either make it look like an actual card and maybe add some sort of ornamentation around the edges, or do something more creative with the Heart and the Q

Still a 5$

blackrocker on Jul 24 '06

yep,

no box

5$

swizman88 on Jul 24 '06

is it supposed to be anyone in particular?

papersky on Jul 24 '06

i want her shirt/cardigan
i agree with Catsgame... add ornamentation to make it look like a playing card or change up the Q and the

chrichri814 on Jul 24 '06

make it look like a card and put it on red.

nikogrande on Jul 24 '06

great idea

soylamorsa on Jul 24 '06

I love the illustration, especially the design of the jacket!

pindib on Jul 24 '06

that looks like hours and hours of hard work - well done - i love it.

swintpoof on Jul 24 '06

I'd like a jacket like that...
$4

lizz612 on Jul 24 '06

I also, would love to own a jacket like that. $5

emily27 on Jul 24 '06

i'd like the jacket as well...

helo on Jul 24 '06

I agree with chrichri814

chrichri814 on Jul 24 '06
make it look like a card and put it on red.

eternity2go on Jul 25 '06

i just want to buy the jacket shes wearing, though on a shirt this is not something id buy.

Ostja on Jul 25 '06

The style kind of reminds me of the a-ha video for take on me..

As a poker player gotta say I like any reference to cards so like this design

ohmystarsNET on Jul 25 '06

oh wow, if the card was rendered better - like a real playing card perhaps - this'd be perfect $4

siezexthisday on Jul 25 '06

add detail to the card and it will be better and yea that jacket is very cool

aswingkido on Jul 25 '06

no box needed i think, cute idea $5

Embrace The Plague on Jul 25 '06

hmm.
i think i'd agree with a lot of the other people.
no card.
otherwise i like it on yellow =)

rulenumberten on Jul 25 '06

Agree, the card isnt well done, but the girl is great!

clarityy on Jul 25 '06

the hat and the card need a bit of work, otherwise it looks reallly cool :)

dartsofpepper on Jul 25 '06

shes beautiful, but i think it explains itself fine without the card. id buy it without

halfwright on Jul 25 '06

um... i think definately without the boxes, maybe with nothing, because, as others have said, it is pretty self explanitory, but maybe put like the Q and Heart on the back or tucked in a corner somwhere so it's there, but just adding a little je ne sais quoi.

Mazy Mallone on Jul 26 '06

that's pretty cool ... I like ... $4

sarahc6583 on Jul 26 '06

i'd love the jacket too, she reminds me of emma watson
Maybe just make a long sleeved tee with her shirt

danjg_21 on Jul 27 '06

looks like mischa barton...

fonebone45 on Jul 27 '06

i agree with a lot of the other comments, in that the drawing looks great, it's a neat idea, but the boxes in the background and the Q heart need somethng different done with them.

toorosietohandle on Jul 27 '06

i like the card & on black.
this is great!

TommyM on Jul 27 '06

Reakky class, i love it, but ye the boxes donne work!

NaughtyPoppet on Jul 28 '06

Really love the idea but the whole "teen" thing has got to go...how 'bout adding more boobage and making her more grown up...less like someone with angst...

janell6267 on Jul 28 '06

pretty and I love lots of color like this ! $5

trust_the_doctor on Jul 28 '06

i dont like the card background either. the girl is really well done though. 4

pixel_dust on Jul 28 '06

I love her hair, I agree on the boxes.

mr.yeti on Jul 28 '06

ditto the boxes - they seem to simplistic when compaired to the girl/teen - emulate a card design more, and it's pretty swank

beka531 on Jul 28 '06

great concept.

atomic child on Jul 28 '06

reminds me of a cafepress design yeah i know ouch sorry

murphy_sj on Jul 29 '06

Wow that is amazing!!!

feliciafairy on Jul 30 '06

i agree with others - the girl is GREAT - but the cards and background do nothing for me.
And i like it in black.

caird on Jul 31 '06

i definitely agree with the comment to make the card a little more ornate... that was my first thought too. love the concept and the "queen"-- just think that you can push this design a little farther and take it to the awesome level :)

Emo_Emotions on Jul 31 '06

awesome

7 days later

MaiaPoakahi on Aug 08 '06

i think you should get rid of the squares and do somtheing cool with the q and heart too.

3 days later

alexan on Aug 11 '06

yoyo, marlo, its micah,

sup, TIGHT, knew youd put that on a T-shirt, isnt it on your myspace too?

anyways heaka tight, ja think youd beable to make a teen king 'o hearts,

love ya,

micah, $5

146 days later

MIGET on Jan 05 '07

WOOT!!!

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