The Future Satisfies
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Jul 14 '06
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perspective issues...
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sweet
$5 |
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more binary ...
it's cute. I like this. |
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nonolarson on Jul 14 '06 Perspective is wrong. Otherwise I like colors and idea.
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align the plug to the candy bar and make the binary say something relevant, and it's perfect:)
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Papaprime on Jul 14 '06 Is the angle off?
I spent a good 15 minutes finagling that.. I just couldn't see how to get it on correctly. I ended up moviing the lettering on the packaging and enlarging the shadow on the bottom of the package to make it look like an edge, but if otghers aren't seeing it, I need to fix it. Nuts (pun!) If there are specific other angles that are too wonky, please point them out, as I'm too close to the material to notice. As for the binary, I had put somehting with meaning, I must have accidentally saved the placeholder binary >. |
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Papaprime on Jul 14 '06 and thanks for noticing the colors, I originally had some really stark contrasting colors and decided late in the design to make them more subdued earthy tones.
Now that I think of it, that's probably where I accidentally turned on the placeholder binary layer and turned off the relevant one > . < ' |
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Papaprime on Jul 14 '06 ooh ooh, and I made the entire thing with my laprtops touchpad from scratch in illustrator.
So for the next few days, I'd like to think I'm special. ;) |
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i think the perspective issues have to do with the candy bar at the end, which looks like it's pointing upwards. i like the idea though.
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i think the perspective issues start to happen with the USB plug
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it looks almost bent. =\ otherwise, nice.
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i just cant get past the angles. its so weird! if that gets fixed, id love it, sucks when a good design goes bad with a flaw such as perspective
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Buy a candy bar, unwrap it as pictured, bite off a chunk and stick a usb flash drive in it. The drive will survive and you will get a nice photo reference.
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you might have to hollow it out a bit
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Papaprime on Jul 16 '06 I may resub, I've fixed up the perspective a bit. I know resubs are against the rules… but I've seen soooo many resubs in the past month that it may be worth a try.
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2 days later
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The USB has a little face on it. Other than that, I like.
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i'd make multiple ones on one shirt.
like a serial cracker or a fire wire hot tomale. y'know.... that. otherwise, cool, just a lil bit of perspective |
5 days later
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LOL I like it
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