good call last milwar, variation in his expression would make it funnier. And "helo," I wasn't trying to make it literally in stereoscopic view, as that would be way too redundant. And literal combustion just didn't seem as comical as explosion.
his knees and lack of elbows bothers me a tiny bit. ok a large bit.
but thats your style so stick with it
i agree with the no text and keeping his face normal
No prob... The text can easily go :) As for the knob knees, it's actually not my usual style, but yeah, I wanted him to look all jazzed and silly with big funny knees and almost boneless movement. Thanks for your comments, everyone.:)
May i make a suggestion. Id keep the first one the same. On the second one id have him standing still, and frowning. Then on the third one have him standing in the same position, but have him completly engulfed in flames, and have his maouth agape/ screaming (in a funny way, not a horific way). Last one can stay the same probably.
very clever. Regarding the text, I would suggest to expand the copperplate at the ends rather than compressing it in the middle, with may make the text a little more cohesive. $5
somethingbode
They are different. I like it.
Lastmilkwar
he should drop the doofy smile in the second fig. to indicate "I don't feel too g.(BLAM!)"
helo
not quite combustion
more like explosion
It doesn't work as part of a stereoscope either
DeadPoetic_Underoath
hah...really nice this one! 5$
Wasiley
I like it, is a good job. Perhaps without text...
polynothing
good call last milwar, variation in his expression would make it funnier. And "helo," I wasn't trying to make it literally in stereoscopic view, as that would be way too redundant. And literal combustion just didn't seem as comical as explosion.
SUPERxDUPER
I'd buy it! 5
Villain Clothing
I agree with Lastmilkwar
Washburnliketheguitar
I love it!
Aristarchus
Any noticable change in his demeanour would take the spontaneity out of his spontaneous combustion.
Leave it as is. $5
mezo
I spy COPPERPLATE.
I like your cartoon man. And the colors you've chose. 'BLAMM' could be more bold & comic bookish.
highpockets
I love it. My sister used to be afraid of spontaneous combustion - I'd totally buy this. I agree with Aristarchus, leave it as is.
4Lanie
Thats true, if you change his expression in Fig. 2, then it wouldnt be spontaeous at all. Nice job. I'd buy it.
joeltorrens
all i can say is no text for me
fangoriously world-class and grand
his knees and lack of elbows bothers me a tiny bit. ok a large bit.
but thats your style so stick with it
i agree with the no text and keeping his face normal
polynothing
No prob... The text can easily go :) As for the knob knees, it's actually not my usual style, but yeah, I wanted him to look all jazzed and silly with big funny knees and almost boneless movement. Thanks for your comments, everyone.:)
bigcow
nice try
hanashimonaka
yeah if it face changed it wouldnt be spontaneous!!!! love the idea, pretty good execution, i dont know if id buy though... 4
transparentman
bigcow on Jul 07 '06
nice try
worse comment ever. how can the artist even attempt to fix it?
I like it w/ the text though. But i like the fig 1, fig 2 ect
calrizeon
this one is great and i would buy it with or without changes
$5
terminal_
good idea, bad execution
Camicie_11
HAHA! Gracioso (Spanish=witty)
burlesque
I love this so much.
And keep the text. It adds to the joke.
yeshchatte
you guys have to print this.
$5
Jemae
it's BLAAM! it's COOL!
letter_of_apology
i like the text. keep it.
lisalicious
HAHHA COOL! different!
chemi hydro
I kind of like the idea of just having an image of the after effects alone and bigger. The concept of spontaneous combustion is good
OompaLoompa
i dont like is knees....
love the style, and i would buy it if it were just fig 2, 3 & 4 only,
no text.
Mazy Mallone
Nice!
317537
WICKED! definitely support that one! 5$
Ava Adore
haha cool!
scrunchie14441
Reminds me of the Spinal Tap movie
jlsynsf051101
cool!
ChromeLegend #2
May i make a suggestion. Id keep the first one the same. On the second one id have him standing still, and frowning. Then on the third one have him standing in the same position, but have him completly engulfed in flames, and have his maouth agape/ screaming (in a funny way, not a horific way). Last one can stay the same probably.
thekungfus
very clever. Regarding the text, I would suggest to expand the copperplate at the ends rather than compressing it in the middle, with may make the text a little more cohesive. $5
yeshchatte
I think this is really funny. I like his knees the most personally. I would buy this.
tireddragonfly
I would buy it. :)
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