WOW...amazing illo, simply beautiful...love it with or without the text. fantastic. $5

beautiful! 5

woow, that's really pretty! you can tell it's the kind of type writer that actually does write dreams. how adorable.

yay illustration!

boo text!

boo signature!

i still have to give it a 5$

WOW! That is gorgeous!

Agree with previous poster: text + signature = bad
/broken record commentary

That aside, I love the graphic; I'd wear it happily.

freaky

Love the typewriter. drop the text and totally a 4$.

I can drop the text and the signature (forgot that was there ~.~;)
Thanks a lot people! Happy dreams to you

love everything except the white tee

i am a writer and i love this $5

Great illustration! maybe on a different colored shirt like some others mentioned.

The second half of your screen name is one letter away from my real last name crazy! How'd you come up with that? Switch the first i and e and that's it. weird tangent, ha ha.

Nice design!!!

yippy ky aye

I looove it. look at all the delicate line work. The stimulating colors... great concept!!!

nice style and illustration.

I think this is wicked cute. I would gladly buy it for myself or for a gift for another....I like it on white also....

The little claw feet are my favorite part...

Nice Job...

Tom

nice wings...
kill the text and the signature
killer illustration.

Wow, beautiful illustration :)
$5

this is incredible. it just grabs my eyes and wont let them look away. i would like it on another color shirt though, and def get your sig outta there!!! $5

I would be glad to make the changes so it could be printed on a color shirt, probably light blue or light pink.
Didn't realize you could pick more than one color shirt though (for submissions!) I picked the white originally to highlight the black and white pen & ink illustration.
....BUT as a graphic for a person to wear, it would definitely look good on a lightly colored shirt. Simple change to make, right? And signature, ::pop!:: I will make it disappear.

Thank you folks for your honest critiques, you've been really helpful.

I actually like it on just a white shirt, really makes the design pop :D
$5

i want this shirt bad!

Beautiful! I love typewriters and the colors are gorgeous! $5

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leave it the way it is. it's perfect. 5$

i love the drawing, but not so sure about the text. 5$

great use of color

I am MASSIVELY IN LOVE with this! Eeeek! Please print! Wonderful use of color and love the concept.

This is quite adorable. I would definetly buy it.

nice illustration.
lose the text & signature & you get a $5

I love this. I would buy it for sure. Look at all those keys! You could really come up with some dreamy stuff on that one.
love it $5

i wish i could see it in detail!!

I love this more than... other things that are not this.

But really I love it.

Wonderful. I especially like the colors....the pinks, greens & blues are very soothing. This is a great dreamy design. Love it!

i love everything about it.

Very, very nice. $5. I would wear this everyday and sleep in it. The only time it'd be washed is when I'd wear it in the shower.

Leave the white, it looks awesome. Good job my friend.

awesome, remove the signature and the text and consider some other colour for the actual shirt and you will have your threadless dreams come true.

cute! 4$

geez - you did it again. Great as always.

awesome! i definitely agree with dropping the sig, but the writing is fine with me.
the typewriter is beautiful! i want one!

I would buy this shirt in a heartbeat if it didn't have the text. It's absolutely wonderful. :)

I would like this not on a white tee... maybe light blue or green?

I really love this submission. You did a great job on it.

(In fact, I love it so much that I rambled on about it from several minutes at the lovesthreadless blog. The link will take you to the post.)

Anyway, it's really lovely. Good luck! I hope it gets printed.

Pleasepleaseplease print this in on natural, grey, or some other nice light colour.

Not white though.

the color and detail is very nice.

(and someone moved the post that I mentioned earlier, so now it's actually over here. Sorry.)

Beautiful.

YES!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

Thank you Verdana for your most eloquent critique of my design and for sharing your wonderful way of seeing!
I am so excited that I could bring a smile to someone with my art.
Funny too, it was a random idea and ink-sketch (micron pens) in my college sketchbook that only until recently had I thought ,"hey -maybe this could look good on a shirt..."

You've put into exact words the spirit of this design!
Typewriters are such a charming and tactile way of making letters, it can't be beat!
I like how you wrote the keys are "Seussical" etc etc. The typewriter, is Alive, and is a only a small part of an ongoing concept/idea I have for a Children's book .

I will be delighted if it gets printed! Thank you for your insights,

Christina aka Bluebirdie

lose the text.... then I'll buy it:)