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no, I disagree. The second bird confused me (because you can't tell his emotion- because he's a paper crane...).
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Yeah, the other bird is a bit ambiguous. Maybe he could be bowing his head in sadness, or cocking it to the side in... spectatorness... or something. Overall it's very good, though.
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maybe the second bird could have a little police hat. or there could be a police bird and a forensic photographer bird too.
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I love the idea of the second bird wearing a little police hat. It would then be *perfect*. Great design though!
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i give it a 3 since i love origami so much. and yes, it is a sin to use scissors for origami which is why it is labeled as murder in this design
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The second bird confuses me--police hat, or a tear? Something that shows it's not the bird that was murdered. Otherwise, very witty.
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The second bird confuses me--police hat, or a tear? Something that shows it's not the bird that was murdered. Otherwise, very witty.
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Thanks everyone! (The crane on the right is a spectator. I considered making a detective bird, but the 4-color limit would have baffled me, unless I made an origami police hat.)
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Did you think about having either the tenticle or the bow of the boat come out of the frame to give it an appearance of jumping out of the shirt. Well done.
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Great slick illustration. I just wish it read more clearly....it took me several seconds to figure out what was going on.
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Wouldn't the chalk outline be broken up pieces if the "body" was found like that? Otherwise the idea is gold and deserves a 5 from me!
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Thanks everyone! (to freecompliments: Nice observation! I suppose we can assume that enough of the crane's body was left intact to make such an outline.)
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