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good design, maybe have the blade of the sword peeking out behind his back a little to further drive home the samari part?
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> swizman88: katanas have short blades. They can't peek that much behind samurai's back.
> pocketmerlin87: would have prefered without -s ? |
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actually, katanas go on the side of your hip..on your left side, and usually there's two, one short and one long. i never seen a geta sandals like that either, they should look like this good illustration, jus need to research little more.
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I totally agree with the above comment, it is really distracting once you notice the sword is on the wrong side. Otherwise, nice work. I'd also consider moving the hand onto the scabard (saya).
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i think the sword is supposed to be through the samurai, like he's honorably killing himself? maybe?
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I'd take the text off, change the blue stripes in the background to brush strokes, and make the sword poke out the back. Aside from all that, excellent concept
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Thanks for your coms. I suppose I can't change this submission, so I'll submit it again, when the vote is over.
1. No stripes 2. No text 3. A longer katana (maybe two) 4. Real geta sandals |
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i didnt get it at first sight... great! but but but, colours are too dark, or maybe it's something related with the fish eyes that doesnt work perfectly. 4 for the idea.
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Really nice drawing, great color on black, but yeah ditch the stripes, they take away from the fish's personality.
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awww man i would love this if it werent for the vertical lines behind the illustration... well done.
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Nice. Fish are gross, but the fact that its a samuria fish ... conpensates.
Plus the shirt is just hawt. |
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It's a cool shirt, but the plural of samurai is samurai. Such as, moose, katana, G-force, deer and other ones that often are miswritten. I like it alot. I'd buy one.
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