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BREATH by NL.

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Submitted on:

Jun 27 '06

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36 comments

Final average score:

1.87 out of 5

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cheerios91 on Jun 27 '06

what the..?

Ninja_runner on Jun 27 '06

that is cool
...but I think it might be a tad cooler if it did not have the heart

squintygirl on Jun 27 '06

I agree, the heart really looks out of place, here. The leaves are cool on their own.

crayzylegz777 on Jun 27 '06

i think the heart's cute! i like it!

Remcovdbosch on Jun 27 '06

the heart is indeed a bit weird, but i like the concept.

oceaniamnl on Jun 27 '06

I love the design, but I don't like it on black. Otherwise, I'd buy it.

thornykins on Jun 27 '06

Would be nice without the heart.

AsStarsGoOut on Jun 27 '06

reminds me of christmas time. . .

IndayDutay on Jun 27 '06

I like it.
We need more trees.
* sigh *

amble on Jun 28 '06

The heart looks great to me! And it's not on black; it's dark green, which is quite fitting.

rebe11e on Jun 28 '06

très joli, simple, efficasse :) 5

Alexandra Prince on Jun 28 '06

take away the heart.

hanashimonaka on Jun 28 '06

no heart, i love the overlapping leaves!!

teechers_pet on Jun 28 '06

This would be rad sans the heart.

synchronization on Jun 28 '06

Either take away the heart, or redo it to make it look like it's drawn in the same style as the leaves. It looks out of place like squintygirl said.

SarahBellum427 on Jun 28 '06

My vote is no heart. The leaves on it's own are superb.

SUPERxDUPER on Jun 28 '06

i don't think it needs the 'breathing' or the heart. with them i'd give it a 3.5; without them, a 5.

emeraldlily on Jun 29 '06

I like it but yeah doesn't need the heart

pwaulie on Jun 29 '06

everyone agrees, nix the heart

pwaulie on Jun 29 '06

and nix the text?

lesquelette on Jun 29 '06

the style of the heart doesnt fit.

makeitallokay on Jun 29 '06

I don't get it. And I'm clever.

hoesclothesandbankrolls on Jun 29 '06

Scrap the heart and I'd buy it.

hazy_sunday on Jun 30 '06

i agree; the heart needs to go.

shazatillion on Jun 30 '06

i think it looks a bit boring and plain...

infamous_kitten on Jun 30 '06

Maybe on a different color shirt.

fadedoak on Jul 01 '06

I agree that the heart is a bit much, I would like to see a varience in tree leaves. Is it Boxelder, or elm that has a heart shapped leaf. Some Oak would give it a nice edge. I like the layering of the leaves but It does remind me of xmas too much (and the deaths of all those trees....) but maybe try a brown or tan shirt?

andyourafternoon on Jul 02 '06

i love this design without the heart, it's really cool!

swizman88 on Jul 02 '06

at least make the heart green to blend in a little more

LadyAurora on Jul 02 '06

I love this design, but the heart looks really out of place... If you are especially attached to the heart maybe make it a little shade of brown and more like something you would find outside.

leyotso on Jul 03 '06

pretty. perfect colors. 5

Jeanicious on Jul 03 '06

Try making the heart like a real heart, from an old biology book. Then it would match the idea, the rest of the illustration and detailed pictures of hearts rock!

milque-toast on Jul 03 '06

I'm in love that is sooo cool!!!