War Within a Breath
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2162 days ago
Submitted on:
Jun 27 '06
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10 comments
Average score:
1.44 from 620 votes
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Rage reference? I hope so.
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maybe a smoother design. it looks too threatening. i understand that it should but it would be more "ironic" if it was very cartoonish.
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screw irony. half the designs on this site are supposed to be ironic. it looks a little out of place... perhaps a few background items?
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forget the title, change the shirt colour to something like dark blue or red and $5.
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I Love this so much
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looks great
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looks like it was made with a computer drawing program... several years ago.
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Thanks for the feedback. Yeah this is just a preliminary desing, it is suposed to look like it was made with a 3d soft from several years ago, its actualy made with 3dMAX then vectror traced to look more poligonal. The title staying, rage against the machine all the way :D i may try other colours. I didnt want anything ironic in this one tbh, and try something agressive.
Thanks again 4 the feedback, i apreciate all the critics and tips, thats how we evolve ^^ keep them coming ;) |
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very pretty, very architectonic
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Looks good, no cartoonishness or background really needed, simple things work better. And i like the colour of the shirt too, there's a million red and blue shirts out there.
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