hehe made me laugh i think you got a great style going on here!!! nice choice of colour too...

She oughta be in more... distress.

I like it though.

I originally called this "Botox Superhero" because he's vain and more concerned with his image than actually helping anyone -- and she's just sitting there in the background, waiting patiently ... kind of a remark on things going on right now in the world

The design is gorgeous, but I only understand the "backstory" because you've explained it. Maybe if he looked more like a superhero, and she looked more distressed, the story would come through . . .

weissdo:
yeah - I see what you're saying & I think you're right ... thanks for the useful critique!