Make it bigger on white.

agreed, make it biiiiiigger. on white. $3

This looks awesome on white! Maybe on another lighter colour? I don't really like gold or yellow. :X

love the abstract-ness of this design.
as others have suggested, I'd make it really really big.
and that yellow is a horrible colour to put it on lol.
MAYBE a light light light yellow, altohugh an off-white would probably be best.

It looks very... common. I mean, a collage of arguably related but only partially visible things in a burst shape?

I'm a big fan of originality and, for the sake of this site, I hope I'm not the only one. Zero.

everyone seems to be trying this sort of thing.

not liking.
sorryyyy.

i agree.. eets not original, which it the point of the contest.. I sorry..

so, whats the point

really, your voting on a design to put on a shirt, not if its an original or not.

nice..

I like it, lots

nice concept- needs to be bigger..

BIGGER!

red ex

BIGGER.

Whoa...Crazy..

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I love the color scheme. I think greens and earthtones are great in this piece but you bring up a good point..

While we are voting for a design to be put on a shirt.. who wants to wear a shirt that looks just like one that some emo kid with bad eyeliner could buy at Target or Hot Topic tomorrow?

I'm not saying that is the case with your shirt but others might think that and thus not like your design.

Personally this reminds me of music.. which is always good but I wish it was in the lower corner of the shirt going upward.

to be fair to the creator of this, its not been entered in the threadless loves threadless competition

"I'm a big fan of originality and, for the sake of this site, I hope I'm not the only one. Zero." - amble

"really, your voting on a design to put on a shirt, not if its an original or not." - butlertotheb

Perhaps you're right, butlertotheb, but I think amble has a point. Threadless tees are special because most of them are ingenius and original. At least, that's why I like them/buy them.

That said, I'm not fond of this design; the elements don't seem to be connected, more just squashed together in the hopes that something pleasant will result.

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bigger but not on white

alittle too much, i can't concentrate on it long enough to get whats going on!

japasy thank you so much for your comment after hearing some of the things it seems like Im in threadless loves threadless it doesnt make sense