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this is an interesting idea. and every cute. but the art is a little slick? i wonder why i think this?
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I really dig this, good concept & clean execution. Though I would like to see you lose the text & the dotted lines.
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lose text, add teeth, on blue = $5
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Get'em laptop, sic'em! Good boy!
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nice illustration, not the kind of subject matter i want on a shirt
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i like it. : ) wouldnt buy it though.
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Two suggestions. 1) Work on the scale of the design to the shirt. 2) Choose a more appropriate typeface. The western woodtype font doesn't mix with your hyper slick drawings.
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haha i love the BYTE
that made my day other than that i cant see myself wearing it. maybe make it a sticker that i can put on my laptop / cell phone but i dont see it as a shirt. |
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The top of the laptop looks so empty... I know you can't put the Apple logo on it, but maybe either make up a logo or change the angle of the screen so there's less gray space.
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great vector job... but weird ass design.
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my suggestions:
- keep the art as slick and sharp as it is. - change the font to some kind of system font and make the "chomps" smaller and closer to the actual "bites". - make the whole thing just a tad bit smaller and higher on the shirt. I just don't understand wanting people to look at my belly/beltline for a design. |
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I like this. Keep the "chomp", lose the "byte". Puns are more what I'd expect from Snorg Tees or Busted Tees.
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I think the buttons on the cellphones are just fine as `teeth` and i like the bee-line things. All the colors are fine.
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interesting, the font doesn't work for me
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ohh this is a most amazing design.
hot pocket. |
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different.
one of the cell phone pictures look a little weird & the font isn't that great but i'd buy it. |
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I would suggest changing the font and down sizing the words. Great Vector.
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bitchin'
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That is freakn' sweet my friend!
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YESSIRRRR!!
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good, but lose the beelines
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nice nice
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i friggin love the graphics, and i dont MIND the text, but the font really doesn't seem to fit... otherwise its perfect
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Jemae on Jun 26 '06 perfect IDEA.......prefer reduce the graphics scale.
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snap..watch yo fingers..the graphic scale is just perfect!! id buyit
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nice graphic
remove text and dotted line tho |
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the text doesn't add anything.
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i like the phones biting without the laptop.
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wow. this all reminds me of how much i hated critiques in design class. thanks for the comments nonetheless.
the dotted lines and text are in place to clarify the subject. suggest that yes, the inanimate objects are moving, and exactly what they are doing. you're all intelligent people, but there are some out there who would surely cock their head to the side and grunt in question. |
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Well... i like it.
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the graphic is awesome, the type totally kills it.
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Cool idea, the lines are distracting though, and if use the text make it more subtle
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damn verison not working with mac bluetooth. bastards!
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I would change the font to something more streamline. I don't know I like the idea a lot, but something doesn't click with me, I think that perhaps a different medium other than a shirt would be better.
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i say let them tilt thier heads and grunt. loose the lines and again the text needs to be less of a feature. crisp graphics mate. £4
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