woah - too much going on. i also dont get it - very confused

provide a zoom option

yes sorry ther ain't no zoom...
It's my first submission...I'll do better next time
Or do you thimk I can submitt a zoom of it ?

put a pic of it with more detail up on something like flickr, and then post a link to that

Some of this is good, but Dale is right, it gets lost. i'd get rid of the type, then i'd pick ONE of those little groups of images and blow it up much bigger. And please don't use the punk/bloat/starburst tool in illustrator. It cheapens the whole thing.

I think the pics kinda screwed up, but the text is the coolest thign iv ever seen.

i hate to score it without acctually being able to zoom in on it

The text is really cool!

Here you go, a zoom from the shirt:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/19897925@N00/

I really like the text, but my eyes keep getting drawn to the wiggly little boring black things on the left