"Phillip stood staring at the shining green ball for a while, wondering what it was for. It smealt fragrent but like nothing he had smealt before. Little did he know, the strange object he was holding was actually an apple, a pure food from the "eden project" in Englend" *Purpose spelling mistakes* - Just trying something a bit different for the new competition!

Why the spelling mistakes though?

There's a load of reasons and you can choose your own personal reasoning behind not spelling things correctly. But for me in this instance it backs up the neive style, and also questions who exactly is telling the *short* story?!

Naive or not, I like spelling and grammar. I like the concept for the shirt though.

Cool illustration.

i like it

the illustration reminds me kindda of Shel Silverstein

WONDERFUL 5$

Yeah, I'm going to check A Light in the Attic and Where the Sidewalk Ends.

Ditto on the Silverstein - that's a really great style. Very original, I like it.

i like it. However, I'm just wondering how something can be very original and remind you of Silverstein

Some thing can be original but still remind you of something. Have you met someone that looks and or/acts like someone else you've met?
I think this is interesting but not my style.

I love it! I'd wear it just for how random and cute it is. Despite my unnatural love for spelling and grammar, I like the spelling mistakes. 5 from me. :)

It's very cute... I think the spelling mistakes add to that.

..but there are no apples in the Eden project...

I really like it, for some odd reason! I would probably even buy this. I think it's the design but mostly the fonts.

:) smallrabbit - the 'Eden Project' is real, mine however is a reference to a future world were pure foods are rare due to food modification - see blog for details of ideas.

Thanks once more everyone for comments. I don't think this design will make it to print and if so I have plans to do it myself, e-mail psychosilver@hotmail.com if you're interested :) peace out