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Just a play on a classic kids' song.
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Hmm that's strange...I'm pretty sure I chose Orange Poppy. I'll have to check when I get home *shrug* But thanks :-)
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hilarious I would buy it just so people would be like "wtf is he wearing a shampoo shirt" I would like to see it get a faded treatment, so it looks old
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tracerbullet, you so silly! why you so silly?
does it take cae of "eyes and ears and a mouth and a nose?" |
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hmm...perhaps if you placed it on the lower left, and had bubbles coming up?
just to jazz it up a bit... but very funny. : ) |
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agree with blue_inversions. and maybe take away the black outline. the faded effect, a shadow, bubbles, change of position are all good suggestions.
cute cute idea. |
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Great suggestions so far, thanks! Also, if the text looks really crappy when you zoom in, it's only because I had to lower the quality to get the file the right size for submission.
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everytime i see one of those head & shoulders commercials i always say head shoulds knees and toes. 5. |
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i don't see how it's funny.
it looks like a shampoo bottle though. so 2 marks for that. don't like the bit in the middle with the h&s k&t. meh. |
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lather, rinse, repeat.
lather, rinse, repeat. lather, rinse, repeaaaat.... As needed. it's nice. i like shampoo. |
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i like it. i dont however like the gold, or the orange it is supposed to be, i'd stick with the blue.
but looks good! thumbs up to you! |
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Get the right typeface up in there and this design would be a lot more effective... Nice idea though...
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It's a cute idea better suited for kids. On adults it may have the unfortunate air of a cheap parody shirt.
I'm a bit put off by the type and the verytightleading. Makes me dizzy... |
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i'd make it bigger, for people to be able to read the small print w/o having to get up real close. great idea. this NEEDED to be done.
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Haha, cute idea. Needs some diff. color choices, though. And I agree that it should be either grounded or faded.
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