RainbowGirl
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Jun 05 '06
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eh? "I'd rather have a girl in the and of my" ???
her dress seems odd. its sticking out too far on the right, as if it was on the swing, but it's not. |
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It's a cute concept, but 1) the typography isn't clear (particularly the e), and 2) the neckline of her dress is really odd. The white lines on her cleavage are distracting.
Also, (in America, at least) the expression is usually "to have/find x AT the end of the rainbow," not "in." |
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yea fix the type, and wouldnt it be "I'd Rather Have A Girl At the End of My Rainbow"?
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tracerbullet on Jun 05 '06 Her chest scares me
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well.. i think i'd rather have some gold at the end of my rainbow.
but hey.. that's just me. plusss the a's, d's and e's are hard to read. |
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