super dinner
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Jun 02 '06
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biticol on Jun 02 '06 Well, it's because of the sample size but i wanted it to be not so obvious, anyway once printed it should be a lot more clear.
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DeadPoetic_Underoath on Jun 02 '06 5$
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very awesome concept, not sure if I like the execution.
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i would love it alot more if it said something along the lines of "don't wait up for me darling" regardless, awesome design
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I can't see this very well...
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yeah, maybe "i might be late for dinner" or
don't wait up for me," like xaimfortheheart said. |
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grammar= awkward. design= sweet.
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eskimokiss on Jun 02 '06 yay!
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I love the concept! Very good-reminds me of a Roy Lichtenstein! The design is kinda confusing though.
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the for for thing is wacky
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nice
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grammar= awkward. design= sweet.
I completly agree. Any of the above suggestions on a sentence would work great. |
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exactly what dennis said
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it took a little while to guess, but i love the concept.
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I didn't have a clue what I was looking at until I read the comments. Even still it doesn't show very clearly... I like the style and concept, but something about the way it comes together, makes it hard to see the whole image.
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yeah, i still can't figure this out...i understand it's a superhero about to fight some godzilla-type creature but i would never have understood that if not for the above comments.
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Hard to make out monster. More definition and would be excellent.
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Can you post a blown-up image of the design?
I like this shirt, but the grammar change is a necessity. |
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biticol on Jun 04 '06 Well I undestand the grammar thing is not very good, all of you probably don't know it but i'm spanish so that's the reason it's not as good as it could because english is not my language... but if printed it obviously could be changed into one of your suggestions.
Thanks for all the comments! |
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I would move the phone symbol on the booth to the lower pane and rotate it so the phone is standing up.
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Perhaps it'd be easier to understand if it were in superman colours since that's what it's based on
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biticol on Jun 05 '06 That's a possibility but in one tone it's easier to see it shaded and darker, even though i can try if it's demanded.
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i.love.it.
$5 |
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i agree with Dex1138 on moving the phone.
nice design, i like the concept! |
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like how the shadow on the wall is a face and a monster....
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Took too long for me to figure out what was going on.
And I'm a huge fan of spacial ambiguity. |
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"honey, don't wait up"
...might have been better. the phrasing is a *little* awkward, but still a fun design |
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Yah, change the phrase, other than that, it's good ! :D
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biticol on Jun 07 '06 Ok, i repeat that if printed i'll let threadless choose the best phrase, because ai i said i'm spanish, my english is not very good and I just did my best for this. :)
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Love it, but I think a better caption is needed.
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I'b buy it. Muy bueno!
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You guys rock hardcore. So creative (even better than i know you two 16.5 year old person!)
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Stupid.
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I thought the phone booth was a refrigerator.
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awesome shirt
just rephrase what he says cuz it sounds kinda awkward |
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biticol on Jun 08 '06 Thanks a lot for comments to all of you.
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I'd definately buy this!! And I love the green!!
Thank you for designing it. Honey, don't wait up. $5 |
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nice. lie it. $5
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