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May 18 '06
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Veverka
Veverka on May 18 '06
Nice idea, but I'd like to see the lines smoother.
death.cult
death.cult on May 18 '06
yeah,lines are kinda jagged,especially on the reindeers pants.
still pretty cool though.
Ellsswhere
   Ellsswhere on May 18 '06
seems very mspaintish... or etch'sketch, like they said, smooth out your lines
Gustavus
Gustavus on May 18 '06
the lines are great.

i think center. on grey shirt.

nice job. 5$
si0uxsie
si0uxsie on May 18 '06
*yawns* Next...
Canuckduck
Canuckduck on May 18 '06
bottom left.
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 18 '06
thanks for your comments.. im in the process of making the lines smoother.. ill post it on my profile when i do.

check back in later.

keep the comments coming. thanks.
romolusIII
romolusIII on May 18 '06
i hate the lines otherwise its cool
etwod
etwod on May 18 '06
i say bottom left is better.
Auberdaine
Auberdaine on May 18 '06
i love this idea, and i'd definately buy it. like everybody else, though, i think it should be cleaner.
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 18 '06
thanks.. im working on it.. i had it cleaner too just like an hour ago and was going to post it but then some how i lost it.. ill have it posted over the weekend though.

thanks for the comments.
flower.thief
flower.thief on May 19 '06
Bottom left is best as tehy say, but Animal Business? Not sure if that's the best name for it? Or maybe I'm missing the joke.
CasualFighter
CasualFighter on May 19 '06
I tuck my shirts in, so no bottom left for me...
janell6267
janell6267 on May 19 '06
well 'Monkey Business' is an actual saying. So I think I would have liked it better with just a monkey in a suit.
64crayolas
64crayolas on May 19 '06
haha, that's not bottom left, buddy.
i like it.
4.
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 20 '06
if you are wearing it, it is.
tearsXwithin
tearsXwithin on May 20 '06
bottom lefty
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 20 '06
okey dokey.. i made it smoother.

just go to my page or

http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i211/electricpresident/animalbusiness2copy.gif
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 20 '06
so ya, from now on, judge the smoother one, not the one shown up top.
jayman22
jayman22 on May 20 '06
i like the edges how they are $5
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 21 '06
thanks.
kaloyster
   kaloyster on May 22 '06
omg people! THE JAGGED-NESS IS PART OF THE STYLE. sheesh. all you want is clear styles, again..

THE JAGGED-NESS IS PART OF THE STYLE.

god.
evd
evd on May 22 '06
did you draw this in ms paint?
evd
evd on May 22 '06
or etch-a-sketch?
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 22 '06
nope, photoshop.. guys, check my page cuz i have a smoother-lined design.
technojunkie83
technojunkie83 on May 23 '06
Excuse me, i just threw up in my mouth... 0
egtobias
egtobias on May 23 '06
nice... I like it on the bottom corner
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 23 '06
technojunkie83, please tell me how to improve if you dont like it.
Arekuchan
Arekuchan on May 23 '06
Centered looks better to me.
kaloyster
   kaloyster on May 23 '06
did you swallow the puke, techno? :)
kevinbibb
kevinbibb on May 24 '06
i like the way the lines are, it makes it seem kind of vga-ish...

shinyrock
shinyrock on May 24 '06
i am disturbed by animal heads put on human bodies...but that's just my own issue i thought i would share. bottom corner is cool.
mrdavenport
mrdavenport on May 25 '06
hey thanks guys for your comments... im probably going to work on this design some more and resubmit it later.

thanks a lot for you constructive criticism
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