Threadless T-Shirts - The Natural Order

The Natural Order by angelito

Scoring finished:

877 days ago

Submitted on:

May 14 '06

Scored by:

2,767 people

Comments:

54 comments

Final average score:

2.42 out of 5

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I figure with this blik comp that one of the most important things is that whatever is included in the design can also be separated out and still work well on a wall....

So the elements used here all stand alone, and can be put together in any number of different ways as wall decals! :)

As far as the 'Off the Wall' theme goes... I think it's pretty sweet to bring the outside inside... put something that belongs on the ground, on the wall instead.

Any opinions or suggestions are all good!

fito on May 14 '06

It's good to finally see you submitting, GoOD lUck Adrienne first 5 is from me.

laihing on May 14 '06

I like the colored leaves/flowers..... but the black and white ones seem like they don't belong because of the texture and detail. I do like the colors though. 3

rainbowcandy on May 14 '06

I love the colors, and I actually like the black leaves. They add some contrast and depth. I prefer the design with the orange. This is really cute. 4 from me.

Hayley Herself on May 14 '06

I agree with Rainbow, I love the colours, the black and white is an interesting contrast of style, and colour whether they belong or not.
When reading your description the design fits more as the Blik thing rather than a wearable tshirt... Although the one without the orange is really nice!
Arrgh sorry, this comment probably wasn't any help -- Nice job though!

inayellowsub on May 14 '06

oooooo.

a little simple for my taste...i wish you had added a couple more things.

but for colour palette, arrangement, and art.....4 :]

iheartmap23 on May 14 '06

i love how the black plant's color and detail contrast with the solid, colorful flowers; very nice (i like the orange best) $5

Shebly on May 14 '06

pretty

bombshield on May 14 '06

Great colors, wish there was more flowers! 4$.

angelito on May 14 '06

Thanks for your comments people - every opinion helps! :)

staffell on May 14 '06

yes very serene 5$

Arekuchan on May 14 '06

I like the yellow/green combination better. Not an orange fan, personally. Nice design!

janell6267 on May 14 '06

i like the orange in the design :)

Handshake Drug on May 14 '06

I gave you a 4. The design is very nice but I don't think that I'd wear it. The one with the orange is definitely better.

Cobalt69 on May 14 '06

I like the cool color version more. Would make nice wall decals. It's not exciting per se, as in, I don't know if it has that "it" quality, but you should really keep submitting work!

Mathcub on May 14 '06

a pretty design, I like how the design with orange really jumps out on the darker grey t shirt. Though not really my style of shirt in general

cunning47 on May 14 '06

i like it; the colors work well.

It would look nice on a wall

hey2thecow on May 14 '06

Like the one with orange on it. :) SO cute.

spacesick on May 14 '06

me like it 5$

Aleesun<3 on May 14 '06

i likee it
and like every one else
the colours are amazing

fraillittlegirl on May 14 '06

I agree that the color combo with orange is best, it adds vibrancy to the simplicity of the design.

telaine on May 14 '06

love it! very pretty. i'd like to see it on a darker shirt color too

CheesecakeBree on May 15 '06

This would work great as wall decals, but I don't feel like it works as well as a shirt. It's still cool... but I try to consider both aspects for this competition. (Hence my so-so score. Sorry!)

http://www.lovesthreadless.com/2006/05/14/the-natural-order-submission-verdict-3/

sheriff wendee on May 15 '06

i love it!

realslimnatey on May 15 '06

you really should have put this design on a shirt with your brother wearing it! would have been a 6 and above, but i guess i can only give you a 5!

*SIGH*

angelito on May 15 '06

awwww slim... you'd be so in with him... just give me the word!

M.C. B.creative on May 15 '06

the orange one is not as nice as the more calm color palette (to me)... I feel like there needs to be an additional element that is black & white with high detail. Currently it looks slightly out of place, another black and white (smaller) element will give it balance.

It will turn it into a design system, rather than 1 random element.

kittygator on May 15 '06

orange is nice

Amelia84 on May 15 '06

love it!! $5 for sure

hans1247 on May 15 '06

Orange! Orange! I dig it. It would look cool on my living room wall.

coffee_pls on May 15 '06

$5! Love the orange one. :)

Skinz on May 15 '06

some how
just does'nt quite work although a bit of tweaking and it will probably be there

leftoverglitter on May 15 '06

It seems too logo-ish to me.
However, it's very colorful! I like the colors.

junkymonkey on May 15 '06

Yap! i loove this one!

rudra on May 15 '06

it's good to see someone gets the individual do-it-yourself wall decal idea (i was wondering with some of the blik subs)

you captured simple, serene, organic shapes that i could see being sold in stores and used as decoration

but, I have two issues:
1) i don't think the design as subbed works very well for a t-shirt
2) the leaves and flower idea while commercially very viable seems a little too uninspired for the "off the wall" threadless/blik design