Atomic sunset
On a tropical island
I rate five dollar

Oooh, fancy. But for the love of god, not on sagestone. 5 dollah

looks good on black

reminds me of "our final moments"
i loveeeee this though. $5

Black is good

i like the idea and vivid colors, but i think it could have been better executed. for one its too boxy, and then the overall detail could be better

blackblackblack
$5$5$5

the entire design just screams The 80s, and while I do love the 80s, I think it may be time to let them go.

Ummm... it'll never be time to let the 80's go...

Thanks for the haiku Deboraborialis... I'm gonna put you on my STP list because you're cool like that.

what about pasting it on the back? along the spine maybe?
pretty hot design either way...

Hahaha... that's what I get for leaving myself logged in on my girlfriend's computer...
Comments about how hot my design is from myself...

A likely story.

Constructive Criticism Haiku...

Orange Colours are funky,
Not big on the boxing though,
Placement is the best.

the syllables are 5-7-5.
just to let you know angryspoons :]

ummm...wouldnt get it, but you can.

The design is nice
Move right over to the side
Definitely black


p.s. Due to the restrictive nature of haiku format, I wasn't able to be very clear: My second like means that I think the placement is cool but it should be moved right over to the side. Right now where it is I think it's a bit too far toward the middle and it looks a little awkward to me.

"My second like"? No, "my second LINE."

The Maroon is the best. second to that is black..then blue if you must..anything else would be a sin

i like...5

NOT black... center.... i just looks better that way paople!

"nice colors - but, it's wasted on something that could be airbrushed on a tshirt at any third rate amusement park. "

^ that's from your first submission, and sadly i'd have to say it still holds true

blinking colours ... give ...me ... seizures . . .

pretty for an atomic explosion. And I like how the moon looks scared. $5

it reminds me of those hollister tees

and the book hiroshima

so

therefore

cinq dollars.

kinda reminds me of that atomic shirt that just got reprinted... but i sitll really like it.

wow I've seen this like 10 times and I just noticed the mushroom cloud in the sky

Well, that changes it alot

On the right colour this would be good but until then no £ or $ or whatever.

looks like you did it on Paint (The Computer Tool). Sorry but I hate it. Details suck. The art itself can't be called art. More like trash. But this is awful. Stick to Tai-Kwan-Doe

You have volunteered for THE DREADED SQUARE

DUN DUN DUN