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I didnt' have much luck with my first design, so here's my second try...hope you like it! (and if you don't, I'll keep trying, hehe)
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ah man, i love the concept of this, and the expressions of the "parents", but the execution could use some tweaking. try adding some depth to the lines and such, and it would be a total 5
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If you are gonna have then in a box, in should be a glass box/cube. Like the cliched mime act...get it...?
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i think he's trying to do a 'mimed picture frame', rather than a real one. picture a mime drawing it with his finger and (if this were on TV or in a movie) a dotted-line effect trailing his hand
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Hey guys, thanks for the comments! MikeClub is right, I was trying to do a "mimed frame" I guess it wasn't as clear as I thought, hehe.
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i'd like it without the box. If possible, have the design off center too would be great.
ie. bottom left in the front, have the design continue on to the side of the shirt :) |
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HAHA. took me a while to get.
it doesn't look like she's holding the baby, it looks like he's just floating in front of her arms. creepy. 4. |
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no leave the dotted line, mime concept it adds to the emphasize of the joke, or you could even havE a BrOken dotted line phrame somehow
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hmm.... it looks to me like you mad in in microsoft word using all the nifty little excessories. But it is called microsoft WORD. its been done too many times before but keep tryin'!
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Cokeman, it looks to me like you're wrong...I didn't make it in microsoft word because, you're right, it's called microsoft WORD. I made it with adobe Illustrator....cuz it's called ILLUSTRATOR. =)
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