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i like it !
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i'd redo the words to "don't eat this, it is poison" or something. just to prevent the double "this"
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Thanks, I'm not english speaking so sometimes I make some errors but if it was selected, I could easily change it in "don't eat this, it is poison" no problem :) thanks again
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I suddenly understand why Eve was so tempted to bite her own... err wait... it was an apple not... uhm... nm.
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I don't know, I think I would like it a lot better if the snake head didn't look like a finger puppet or something like that. It just doesn't seem to match the rest of the design.
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i like it except in reality, the snake was actually encouraging eve to eat it the fruit - not discouraging her.
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the tush looks hot, but the serpent def never says it's poison.. I'd go with a more scholorly quote.. and reform the serpent, it looks.. like a sock puppet maybe?
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I like it! I agree with everyone else though with eliminating the second this and replacing it with "its" or "it is"
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