Sweet citrus delight
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2231 days ago
Submitted on:
Apr 19 '06
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Average score:
1.91 from 2,130 votes
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sweet!
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love the bright colors.
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this is a case where extra swirls and swishes actually give the design something extra. something bother's me about the text though. it's either the wrong font...or you don't need it. w/o the text it would be a 5.
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bothers...
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I wish you didn't use three different fonts, two would have been good enough, but besides that this is pretty cool $4
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lose the outline around 'delight'. this is grreat!
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center it
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don't center it, leave it where it is, but i think that you should defintiely make all the text one font or lose it completely.
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by the way, very good job and luck to you on your first sub
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beautiful and pop-arty!
great first sub. Looks best on the green... more citrus-y too! $5 |
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good job, this is great! It makes me hungry for some indian food.
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Fun! I particularly like it on green. I agree with whorrible_jack, though, that using three different fonts is pushing it; "sweet" looks great, and "citrus" is fine, but "delight" is the only diagonal line (of text) AND the only two-tone element in the design, which is odd.
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Actually, since the shirt is called sweet citrus delight, I think it ONLY works on the green.
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She looks like she's taking her pulse?
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I love it! Cool Indian Traditional Dancer with pop art! CooL!
I would buy it! :-) |
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Red please!
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cool
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sweet! 5+
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i enjoy the graphic, and i think the typography is fine, i've seen photographs of old, overseas adverts which had smashups of fonts in them. i think the different fonts gives it that something extra. 5$.
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A slick design. Very nice work. I would buy it.
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Loose the fonts and everything's lovely.
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the red shirt $5
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change the text to "sour citrus death" and you've got my vote! ;)
good drawing |
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I want it in blue!
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5 for design. i love it! 00000 for placement.
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centered
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this looks TERRIFYINGLY like my mom when she was young. seriously. i showed it to my sister and she almost peed herself.
cool design. |
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this girl looks like mary kate or ashley olsen, im scared
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No text would make this a million times better.
I love it on the green. ^_^ |
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totally cohesive
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I agree with pp... 5 without the text.
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i love your colors , but what does it mean??? i'm not gonna wear a t-shirt if i I don't get it.
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I like this and really love the font on "Sweet"... but with the random words, it feels kinda Old Navy, to me. Illustration is great though!
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what it means,even when its kind of late to explain,..its sort of a commercially poetic product.The Sweet symbolizes the girl,with the loveley face.The Citrus: obviously the orang-yellow tones I used,and the Delight is the feeling you get when you see it all together.It's a pubblicity for sweet asian sensations.
today is my last day but I think I'll be hanging around here from now on.Thank you all for your nice comments. |
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it does feel a little old navy-ish, but that doesn't mean it's not a really cool design. it might be just as cool without the text...
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