This looks stolen...

I don't have much to say other than that this would look better on any color but white, and that it is much too small.

this looks too suspicious...

to many people would be looking at your chest to reda it cuz its so small...0

It's inappropriate to suggest that this shirt was stolen without presenting proof. I have no idea one way or another if this is an original piece of artwork, but neither my feelings nor yours have any bearing on the legality of this submission. I do not assert that I believe that this submission is original, but I challenge you (staffell and i_twirl_batons) to present evidence to the contrary to back up your potentially damaging suggestion.

I've never really been a fan of T-shirts that take more than a minute to read... wearing one now means that I have to stand in place for that whole minute while someone else begs for personal closure to the story... then they show it to a friend, and it another minute of human billboard stasis.

i would be soooo sick of ppl wanting me to let them read my shirt...and since there is a lot of text....it would waste a lot of my time.... i like the idea...maybe without the text...

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I really don't think anyone would want to read the whole shirt because it's just the directions, it's not really that humorous. The humor is in that it's on a shirt, and this it is just directions on how to make a balloon animal.

LOVE THE SHIRT.
PRINT IT IN YELLOW
$5

stolen how? i've drawn it from scratch, text was edited from a how to guide. I wanted to loose the text and do a simplified version but didn't have time, as i don't do graphics.

Question if i did a more simple 123 version with only pictures, on a nice coloured shirt with better sixe and placement, would you like it or is it just a bum idea to suggest making a balloon animals on shirt?

i don't think it's a bad idea, just make it a lot bigger, and centered, and lose the text.

yeah, with just pictures, it'd be a win.

It's an alright idea, but I'm not sure it works well as a shirt. And as a suggestion, I wouldn't recommend noting that you "didn't have time" since this is an ongoing competition. I suggest not submitting something until you're happy with it. "I didn't have time" just sounds like a bad excuse. Don't get me wrong, I do like the attempt.

its cute
but i dont think people would like to read the little words

Jeff koons would love it !!!

i think that the word content is great. its not designed to be read. the small print around the images adds to the overall aestheticism of how an instruction book would look, and this is how it should be to get across that it is from a book like this.
is this not obvious? i really dont think the designer of this shirt wanted people to stand infront of the potential wearer for 5 minutes reading the shirt.thats just foolish. its humourous and its a good talking point. its great.

soo that's how you do it!

Cant read. D:

ew, please. not in white.
yellow, definitely.

& i love the simplicity about it.

although i can't read the words & that kind of makes me sad.

Great idea i think change the placement and make it bigger of something. Bettr on a yellow tee not white

i'll re-submit in a reduced more classy form to all your liking
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I'm SO tired of everyone yelling "it's stolen" the minute a new design hits the page. For crying out loud. Give it a rest.

If this shirt had:
Bigger Pictures.
Bigger Words.
And it was down the middle..

.. Then this would be a good shirt.
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why not just do a series of pictures left-to-right?

i just learned how to make a dog out of a balloon the other day...

The balloon needs to be colorful and remove the words.

FAntastic idea!! but i do agree with miss brightside, pictures going across would give a better visual.

I've finalised a new design and uploaded, it should be up soon. re-jigged the layout and made it basically simple and clear. I think you'll all like the re-design more.

WHY would anyone want an instruction pamplet on their t-shirt about how to make a balloon dog? they save those instructions for the inside of their box/bag for a reason, its like an advertising t-shirt

[why and instruction manual]
you'll see in the next version where i was trying coming from it's not the instrustions i'm interested in here, it's the process of creation. I said it before that i rushed this. The shapes of the dog forming are very beautiful, you'll see.

balloon looks like condom