ewwww

no

the neck is horrifying and i don't think many people are going to like the crotch guitar.
the high heel is nice though.

just totally demented.

Her shoes are odd. Her breasts are fake... and her hair? Not liking this one I'm afraid.

this is my first submission, had to get it out of the way, please critique...

She's clearly not playing the guitar. Honestly, it looks more like she's masturbating with it. Nice drawing style, though.

so im guessing you wanted to look anime styled naked punk girl. Her body needs lot of work. study lil more of the human anatomy.. and her face looks really creepy because she has a normal facial structure with a hugeass anime eyes, which is contradicting style.. stick with one, if u gonna have normal body have a normal face.. anime eyes? then big anime head and petite body

this is where boners go to die.

this is f-ing creepy. pretty, but creeeeeeeeeepy.

Maybe if her head was back and she was playing the guitar? I don't mind the hair, it's different than all the other subs.

The guitar makes me sad.
I'll second the suggestion by theRtist to study anatomy more, although I don't necessarily have a problem with the big eyes. I don't think you're going for an anime look; i'll assume you were going more for a 'tripping on lysergic goodness' thing.

The "girl masturbating with a guitar" idea is pretty cool, but turning her into an alien turned this into a design I don't think I could ever wear.

... her neck is made of putty to bend that way.... her eyes...sure its ok to super-deform things for stylistic reasons- but she's not looking at anything...shes just blankly staring no where...with a wierd smile on her face...which is a tad creepy...especially combined with the bendy neck.

nice heels though =)

not a bad first try- but I don't really think most people would wear this...and the anatomy needs a bit of work.

Its a bit scarey. Like adeformed alien with a guitar. Sorry bit too wierd for me. Think style is quite good. Keep trying