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i think its great. poe would be proud. the line work really reflects his writing and personality. i really like the dull color shirts.
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I'm with AdamMisfortune on this one. I do like the art, but I think the overall effect is too happy/cartoony to be truly invocative of Poe's raven and lost Lenore.
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I adore Poe with an intense passion, he is an absolute genius. But.. something about the way the lettering is... and... I just don't know if I'd wear a big chunky "NEVER MORE" on my shirt.
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i think it all needs work, honestly. though i love poe i don't feel this is the best tribute to the raven. it seems a little lazy to me...
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Sorry think this is underdeveloped and the idea is weak. Keep going though....god that sounds patronising.
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The raven is much like the lettering which could very be what you were getting at, but it isn't very appealing to me
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pseudointellectualism...
sorry i wouldnt pay to have a huge, obvious and overused literary reference on my shirt... maybe if u came up with something clever |
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Oh damn, thats nice. Keep it simple - black tee.
$5 Is it worrying I think of The Simpsons episode whenever I see this poem? |
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I think the placement is too high on the shirt. Move it down a bit, work on the bird, it will be gorgeous.
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