i like it!...but im so bummed about the cloud

interesting, but it just doesn't work for me.
The ships are tiny, the cloud is huge and whats up with the pink lazer?

that pink bit put me off completely... i just didnt understand it when i saw it... I read the Title but all i could see was a plane, chopper and a crap load of colours. I had to read the other comments to notice there were ships.

this piece needs a bit more clarity. maybe if the light was yellow? even then, the ships are wicked small and makes it hard to read at first sight.

Isn't the helocopter's "pink laser" actually a spotlight to illuminate the ship? I dunno, that's just what I got from it especially since it's not the same kind of missle fire.

Needs a little work. Colors are harsh, imporant details are way too small.

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NOO!!! That just sucks.

I like the concept, but the emphasis seems wrong right now: way too much cloud and weird pink helicopter raygun thingy, not enough ships and subs and planes and such. Try playing with the sizes and colors some more.

agreed, colors needs to change, it was way too hard for me to figure out the whole illustration.. esp when there is no zoom!

Hi. Thanks for the comments.

1. Clouds. Clouds are big and I figured it contained the design. I understand that it may look wrong, I actually prefer it without. It doesn't have to print.
2. The pink 'laser' is radar from the helicopter. It's beaming info back to the big ship to deliver coordinates for the attack.
3. Re: detail. It's hard to portray a design in a little 340 px wide box. I'm no net wizard and don't have a clue how to do all the fancy flash zoom stuff.
4.Cheers