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thanks for lookin at it.
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I bet she loses consciousness before a single drop of nectar passes through her lips. I <3 crazy straws.
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The cup is waaay to small, impossible to see from a long ways away.
I thought she was eating string from far away, but if you make the cup bigger, I think it'll be easier to tell. |
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its good, but its not exactly clear what she's doing. at first, i thought she was taking a puff, and that was the smokse and it was saying something. i didnt even see the cup at the bottom.
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Agree w/ above about the straw, and I like the fact that the cup is small... makes it funnier. Great idea!
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first i thought she was smoking something, then i thought she was throwing up.
but now i get it and that's a pretty cool idea. |
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o man, i totally didn't get what was going on at first. i tohught it was a blo-pen, and i was trying to read it...
but yea, nice, i love crazy straws. |
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Would be better if you outlined the orange part of the straw in the same colour as you've drawn the top half of it. Right now it looks like the juice is flowing in crazy shapes of its own accord.
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