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Oxfrog

About my design

by Oxfrog
This is the improved version
Bramish
   Bramish on Mar 15 '06
Was that traced from Natalie Portman?
prettylittlelightningpaw
prettylittlelightningpaw on Mar 15 '06
tori amos, michael jackson, natalie portman, and maybe jessica simpson?
SemantiTheft
SemantiTheft on Mar 15 '06
... I'm not sure, but I'd cross the street.
Oxfrog
Oxfrog on Mar 15 '06
haha, no acually its my girlfriend and natalie portman morfed in a picture, and then drawn by hand and improved colouring in Illustrator
gorilla_with_an_axe
gorilla_with_an_axe on Mar 15 '06
The lines above the lip look a little like a Hitler 'stache in the making. Lose those and make the nostril a little smaller.
dancingwithmyconfusion
dancingwithmyconfusion on Mar 15 '06
something about the lips is weird..i like it tho
Dorme
Dorme on Mar 15 '06
Im sure your girlfriend just loves this...
sweetie2012
sweetie2012 on Mar 15 '06
A very ugly blonde woman?

Nice effort, I really just don't like the look of the design.
ruzkin
ruzkin on Mar 15 '06
You need a lot of work on your illustrator skills, I think. The lines are messy and don't convey form, the hair looks like a dreadlock wig.



Do the whole thing over I think, without using lines, just layers of colour.
DemonElite
DemonElite on Mar 15 '06
Sorry. Not feelin' it.



Havenspear
Havenspear on Mar 15 '06
Don't like the filcrum. If you took that out it would look better. But I still wouldn't wear it.
twangd
twangd on Mar 16 '06
if *this* is the improved version...



honestly? this looks like it was drawn by a kid in primary school. good effort but you need a lot more work before your next submission.
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Oxfrog
Oxfrog on Mar 18 '06
Well, that was about were I aimed with this one, to get some crites'm. :) I like u ppls encouraging (however thats spelled?) notes to me. I better go train my ill.skills then. :)
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