please remain calm
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Mar 13 '06
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I am not usually one of those people who says get rid of the text, but I think that there are some better ways to convey the same thing without it. Maybe if you gave the guy some wings so that he was obviously associated with an airline...I don't really like the plane...the art styles dont match up for me it seems just kind of placed there rather than making up any kind of actual design...
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I do really like the idea though...that scene in fight club referencing the crash procedures is great...
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more colors but 5$
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I think it's interesting. The plane is fine as it is, but I agree that maybe the guy should have wings or braid on the cuff of the sleeves would better identify the him as a pilot. I'd be interested to see how you do the graphics on the black tee. Other color options, and I might buy it. Good job, Brenden. (Love your trade mark/signature!)
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The 50's style drawing and the brown color scheme go hand in hand. I like it...it reminds me of ww2 era propaganda or nuclear bomb drill instructions. Nice.
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This shirt is fantastic.
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I agree with the point about the text from BloodyMidget, or even keep the text and ditch, pun intended, the plane. That way the whole thing would be slightly more abstract and from the look of the guy could even be some psycho doc from dream-hell with some wierd looking mask on. And it would be kinda like a 'be calm' order from the state...i.e. 'be anesthetised, don't react....be a zombie....take what we serve to you' irony.
Despite these suggestions and rambling - I do like it. 4. Think I would prefer the slate colour you suggest. |
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i would like the design better if the plane was trailing smoke or had a broken wing... something making it obvious that it was in danger of crashing.
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wow, i guess i didn't know what to expect as far as comments go. thank you to all of you that have given good feed back and critique.
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there should be a little tube & a bag coming out of the mask thingie. now it just looks like a doctor on a crashing plane.
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knowing that you are a great artist, and having seen other stuff that you've done, I really appreciate this tshirt. I think if I was wearing it, people would see it and it would start them thinking about tons of different things, which is cool. It's good keeping people on their toes.
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Really looks like you just combined two stock images with text.
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I love your logo. What's your website for work projects?
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whistler pot pie,
i am in the process of building a website right now, but if you are really interested in seeing some work i can email you a pdf porfolio that i have made. |
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I think both images should be the same color.
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i think you should stop trying. just give up. that looks like you made it in Paint.
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I like the shirt. mrclean is a douche and must not be a designer seeing as he doesn't have a link, lame. anyway..it's nice.
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big fat zero, im terrified of planes.
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Duck mannnn,
Ain't go no handsss. Duh duh duh duh duh DUCK MAN. The oxygen mask is without the oxygen tank, and the cutoff is pretty harsh. |
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i really like this. 4$
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When I saw it, it made me laugh alittle. I defiantely like it. 5
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36 days later
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boring....1
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