Should the small text be smaller and unreadable?

this maes me so mad.. i just subbed a milk carton one that i did like a month ago. damn it... it had bobby fisher on it though not a brain

The text doesn't look right. I can't remember the word for it, but the far end of it should be smaller than the near end of it. As it is, it is neither lined up with the bottom of the cartoon or the bottom of the brain picture.

that was an incredibly poor explanation.

Neither the top or the bottom of the test is lined up* (by which I mean, at the same angle as)

The lines of the text and the brain pic are all off. Also, fill in the text - don't just leave it as question marks. Take a minute to look up the dimensions of an average human brain.

I don't mind the text being out of perspective, sometimes its more fun if an illustration doesn't mimic reality

It's way out in the water, see it swiming.

^^^that was the first thought that came to my....wait...where did it go?

I love the idea, but why does "my mind" look like an oven mit?

Ugh. Perspective is lacking. Text must follow the same perspective rules as carton.

I did it out of perspective on purpose, but I didn't realize it would bug everyone so much. And the question marks were supposed to be because you can't remember. But I guess no one got that except me.

why did you do it out of perspective on purpose? i think it wouldn't be as bad if you changed the angle of the bottom of the carton underneath the text, so it is not as acute.

and maybe the ??'s could be replaced with "I can't remember..." "I'm not sure..." "Hmm..." or something along those lines...

Completely agree with sonmi.

Agree with sonmi. Version 2 is going to be great... I'll $ that

animals were hiding behind rocks

yeah, the dimensions are messed up a little

It's neat, but hmm...not really my kind of tee. =X

With your feet on the air and your head on the ground
Try this trick and spin it, yeah
Your head will collapse if there's nothing in it
And you'll ask yourself

Where is my mind?
Where is my mind?
Where is my mind?
Way out in the water, see it swimming

I was swimming in the Caribbean
Animals were hiding behind the rock
Except for little fish
When they told me east is west trying to talk to me, coy koi

Where is my mind?
Where is my mind?
Where is my mind?
Way out in the water, see it swimming

this is whats wrong.

the angle of the base of the carton doesnt match up with the angle of the text, picture, names etc. this gives off poor perspective and the design looks less effective than it would have been if it all matched up.

i like the idea though, why would you want the perspective to be off on purpose?

I agree with sonmi too. But this is brilliant anyways :)

obnoxious

think it'd be awesome if you worked with those suggestions a little more.

(and a hearty less-than-three to the other dude who thought of the pixies.)

i'd buy it if you replaced some of the ??'s with words/description

I would definitely wear this... 5$

I liked the suggestions about perspective and text. It works for me as is though. 5 for now, definately $5 with modifications. :)

I really dislike this submission, the theme has been done before, and it seems like something that you could get at Hot Topic along with the "Happy Bunny" Stuff.

But if you're going to submit it, you could guesstmate the hight and weight of a brain, or search google for the average size.

I really want that Bobby Fisher shirt that point playa6 said was submitted.

the brain should be in more detail

and you should have put in the weight and the height of the brain instead of having ??, that looks shit.

and the perspective of the box containing the picture of the brain is wrong. the side on the right should be shorter than the left...

Genius. Just... sort the perspective out, yeah? =)

I like it, but it would be better if some of the information, like the weight was actually on there besides '??'

i love the pixies, but not the shirt.

i think you should make the text unreadable. or maybe just a little more blurred. but i like the skewed perspective style, it makes it look more cartoony. 5$$

I like the perspective as is, it's not very strict in the ilustration style, I don't see why the text should conform to it. I do think that putting thigs like 'hmm' and 'can't remember' would be much better than questionmarks.
In general 'no one gets it but me' is a mark of something not working.
I'd also prefer it slightly off-center to the right, something about skewed perspective, but still being center throws me off.

how did you know I was lookin for my brain?
O nevermind I found it but its still a awesome idea

ditto showerhead