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Mar 01 '06
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this is my joy of text contest submission...hope you like it.
wbljr13
wbljr13 on Mar 01 '06
well i was a little late on the JOT submission so... its just in the regular running now.
SemantiTheft
SemantiTheft on Mar 01 '06
The sails remind me of that scary bird guy from the muppets. Was always pissed off about something.
staffell
   staffell on Mar 01 '06
lol
wbljr13
wbljr13 on Mar 01 '06
oh yeah the blue dude haha

groundcontrol
groundcontrol on Mar 01 '06
I like the brown 5$
Evol_won
Evol_won on Mar 01 '06
you dont show the placement

jesusinameshhat
jesusinameshhat on Mar 01 '06
I think you did a really good job conveying the shape of the boat with the text. However, the sails and flags (especially the flags) kind of throw my off for some reason. I'm all about simplicity, but maybe just adjust them somehow.

Good work though, 4
byelka
byelka on Mar 01 '06
I agree with jesus on this one. It might be the big white blocks of the sails, or the combination masts/flags in the same red, but the rest of the design doesn't live up to the awesome work with the text.



4 for now.
wbljr13
wbljr13 on Mar 01 '06
thanks glad u like the text, i agree i didnt need to outline the sails and i think i should tone down the whiteness to a tannish
chocolatunicorn
chocolatunicorn on Mar 02 '06
i love the text, but the white sails are just....too much empty white space
kirstenlovesdinner
kirstenlovesdinner on Mar 02 '06
not too bad. and agree with the others. the sails could have a bit more detail.
sleeping pill
sleeping pill on Mar 02 '06
kind of like it
kineylikes
kineylikes on Mar 03 '06
the ship kinda looks like a genie's lantern.



but it's a nifty little design, regardless of unintentional genie and muppet references. too bad you didn't make the JoT deadline.
notchrisp
notchrisp on Mar 03 '06
the words work great on the ship, but i think the sails need alittle work, maybe include some of the red in the text
markers
markers on Mar 04 '06
i sorta like it. you know, sometimes i don't , but right now..it's alright. 3
Trueflight
Trueflight on Mar 04 '06
It would be cool if you were to turn the ship's sails into the word "BON".
waystoattack
waystoattack on Mar 05 '06
sail boats!! always get at least a four fromme
WESTY77
WESTY77 on Mar 05 '06
i reli like the text... flags and sails need work...
iheartmap23
iheartmap23 on Mar 05 '06
yeah sails need a bit of workd...i like the rest a lot though (preferably not on pink or light blue)
iheartmap23
iheartmap23 on Mar 05 '06
$ by the way
mininess
mininess on Mar 06 '06
I like its simplitude but... Placement?
streetwise
   streetwise on Mar 06 '06
nice
jdrumsti
jdrumsti on Mar 07 '06
I really like it. This is one shirt that I might actually buy but everyone wants to know the placement.
CoveredinPunksBlood
CoveredinPunksBlood on Mar 07 '06
If this was placed anywhere on a shirt other than the inside where no one could see it I wouldn't buy it.
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