d.r.e.a.m.s.
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2177 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 23 '06
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2.01 from 2,159 votes
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personally not my style but it flows in a nice way. It would have been nice to see the graphic bigger so that we could see what is going on and what it is...what does the text say?
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Yeah, you should tell us what the text says so we can criticize it!
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I can't make out what is going on in the design.
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I can't read the paragraph.
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This is what the text says:
D.R.E.A.M. Dream is a state of mind marked by abstraction or release from reality. Dream is a series of thoughts, images, or emotions occurring during my sleep. In my opinion: Dreams is what we are made of. |
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I'd like to see a closer picture of the design. Hard to tell what it is. Too many color options.
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what you mean too many color options....
REMEMBER COLOR IS PERSONAL... I SUGGEST U TO TAKE A LOOK AT IT FOR 2 MIN AND YOU'LL FIND OUT WHAT IT IS. |
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^ woah! rudeness gets a 0!!
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that is not rudness.
I am just giving you guys a suggestion..... !!!!!! |
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I Apologize if anyone took it in a bad manner. my apologies..... sincerely, VICTOR JACOBO |
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Does it really say: Dreams *is* what we are made of?
Should be: Dreams *are* what we are made of. Don't even get me started on ending the sentance with a preposition. Okay, you got me started, to be completely accurate, it should say "We are made of dreams." But we'll let you slide on that one. ;) But I would like it if it said "Dreams are" instead of "dreams is". |
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he was even more incorrect then "dreams is" he says "dream is" so ya get your grammar rite on something that ite be made...
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You are totally right...
i was thinking and writing kind of fast. ... but yeah is shoul say Dreams are what we are made of.. thankssssssssss |
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THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS....
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i sort of wish it had more color, since i for one don't dream in a monochromatic scheme. but i like the idea.
and i love toast, don't you mean "incorrect thAn"? and "so yOU"? and "grammar riGHT"? it's a little hypocritical if you don't bother to make sure you're spelling correctly, don't you think? |
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i think this is very pretty
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Viktor, that one tiny word would be easily corrected if it were printed. And I think it's really pretty anyway.
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The color makes it look like someone just had an accindent opening a bottle of barbeque sauce. It looks okay on the light blue. I love the idea though.
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I want to see a close up of the tee shirt, but it looks great!
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looks great! would definitely buy it!
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too many tiny starts-in-circles going up the shoulder. the design would be tighter if you used less and put more space between then.
I generally like those colours, but not with this design. light blue on dark blue, or white on light blue would be better, in my opinion. |
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mezo on Feb 24 '06 What am I squinting at here?
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I like the black, red and light blue options. If you do increase the font size then maybe move the text to the bottom right of the design, rather than centered.
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I don't really get it, but it's gorgeous so who cares? Personally, the orange one and the brown one are my faves.
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I'd feel more comfortable giving this a high score if I knew what the main central part of the design (the...flying thing and the text) actually looked like. It appears like it's awesome looking, or at least that it could be awesome looking, but it's hard to tell when it's less than 100x100 pixels.
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I still have no idea what this is. It's pretty to look at but I can't make heads or tails of it.
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I don't get it. And your CAPS LOCK REPLIES are hurting my eyes. It has potential though, if I could just figure out what "it" is.
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minimalistic, classy little design. i like it. definately should have included a larger image of the graphic itself.
pity about HOW you've PRESENTED yourself in REPLIES to OTHERS. and honestly guys, don't bleat about grammar if you can't pull it off yourself... |
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It is a pretty small image, but it fits it fine considering the shirt seems to be going for a minimalistic design. Overall, I still like it.
+4, would buy. |
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I'd like it if it were big enough to read without people coming up an inch away and squinting. But otherwise a very nice design..
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stingerstyler on Feb 27 '06 I like the design and the overall shape. But I agree that it is hard to make out what it is. Still I like the design!
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Dreams are that of which we are made
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Neat design and concept, even despite the minor problems that have already been commented on and the lack of a larger image.
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No one would ever be able to read the shirt.
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don't tell people that they "would get it if they just stared at it for 2 mins," for one thing, you know what it looks like so it's impossible for you to imagine what it looks like to people who haven't seen it before, and secondly, it's hella small. i'm not saying it's a bad design... it's just that no one can see it, which defeats the purpose of posting.
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ooo looks good on a shirt - i think i might like the placement starting at the end of the shoulder and going across the chest..in other words..just move it to the left... but then again maybe not and for the text -
you say "D.R.E.A.M. Dream is a state of mind marked by abstraction or release from reality. Dream is a series of thoughts, images, or emotions occurring during my sleep. In my opinion: Dreams is what we are made of." maybe just use "dreams are what we are made of" and incorporate it into the design instead of using straight text...it would add to the flowyness of it :oD |
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