ASCEND by xiv
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Submitted on:
Feb 23 '06
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dylboteque
dylboteque on Feb 23 '06
the text doesn't bring me enough joy for it to work that well.
Are there really enough space program fans to support this?
tesco
   tesco on Feb 23 '06
N is way too slim
streetwise
   streetwise on Feb 23 '06
nice detail on the shuttle! i could also see the type as smoke and fire from the afterburners...would be a cool touch maybe?
poopy1125
poopy1125 on Feb 23 '06
yeah, the N is making me angry.....
dmenkes
dmenkes on Feb 23 '06
The N needs work. 4.
Barkon
Barkon on Feb 23 '06
Barkon
Barkon on Feb 23 '06
(whoops. hit post too soon). Nice idea. Critique: The logotype needs work. the "A""S" combo read as an FL initially. Also, the '"C" and the "D" are disconnected for no reason. The "D" reads like a sort of "A". Perhaps if it was inverted so the top was wider than the bottom?

I would also consider adding a bit more tension to the illustration. the side view of the shuttle in the gantry is very static and doesn't fit with the concep of 'ASCEND'.

As my GD prof used to tell me: "Nice start!"

funkmunky
funkmunky on Feb 23 '06
Join the cross stroke of the A to the Right hand vertical and continue the white stroke around the shuttle illo and it will look more fluid and more readable. Good Typo. Nice Idea.

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mezo
   mezo on Feb 24 '06
The shuttle itself is pretty aweome...I'm not sold on the text though.
mezo
   mezo on Feb 24 '06
Do not hate me for typo'ing awesome.
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