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haha!
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I really like this!!
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I really like this.
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love it!
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too simple.
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and also, who wants to wear "gasp" on their shirt?
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I WANT IT TO SAY "YOU CRAZY SON OF A GUN!"
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i don't like 'gasp' but i like the concept... 3 for now
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AWESOME.
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omgomgomgomgomgomg.
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I gave it a 5, this is a really awesome design
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PRINT THIS! <3 5$
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LOVE IT, LOVE IT. PLEEEEEEASE PRINT THIS. This means alot, coming from someone who rarely uses all caps. $5
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NGee on Feb 22 '06 I think it's a very wearable design...and as such I'd wear it. 5
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I love silent movies! If I could give it a 10, I definitely would!
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I'd rather it say " Le Gaspeth!"
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I like it a lot! But... as a couple others have commented, I think I'd like it even more if it said something a littl e more old-fashioned to go with the motif.
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not a big fan of the text
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I totally say 'gasp' on occasion. For that, you get a buy.
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Gasp indeed, 5$
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LOVE it! 5$
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Ooh, yes. You have to know about those old fashion movies to appreciate this! 5$
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i reckon its a 5. it could be a 6 if your played with the wording/content.....
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hell. yes.
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I'd prefer it if the frame was oval, so it carried the subliminal idea of an open mouth, to make the gasp a bit stronger. Also, curly quote marks would be obligatory in the period you're referencing - straight quotes come later. It's a lovely, bold, simple idea, but with so little on the shirt you need to get each element absolutely perfect. With those changes, it would be on my shopping list for sure.
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good concept, but for design purposes, i think the design would be tighter if the "frame" around the "gasp!" were a bit smaller. It seems a big too large, and I realize its probably realistic that way because most of the subtitles in a silent movie would need more room for sentences and whatnot. But for this purpose, I would tighten it up
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tracerbullet on Feb 23 '06 @cambert & judeo18: Thanks for the constructive criticism. I actually did some research on silent film intertitles before I made this, and most of what I found showed that from the 1920s on, many of the fonts used actually did have straight quotes, which is why I went for that instead. I had experimented at first with some script-style writing, but it didn't seem to work right. Also, I purposely avoided making the frame oval because I was going more for a straight intertitle look--that is an interesting idea though. As far as the size of the frame is concerned, I did have a smaller frame originally to see how it worked, but the design seemed much too cluttered, so I opted to stay within the proportions that would be used if a longer sentence was written on the card. Thanks a lot for the feedback :-)
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streetwise on Feb 23 '06 like black the best for the old b/w movies...a little text or grit would be cool too, like old film...5
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thatnk u so musch streetwise for commenting it is from the old silent movies. u can't change the shape opf the box cause that's what they looked like in the movies. ilove this shirt to pieces and really really really want it to be printed. $5.
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Love it! $5
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wrong font
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yes. yes.yes. $5
but id like it much better if it said something else. |
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You get a 4 just for the title alone! The Sound of Silents... aha.
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It think a serif font would make it look less modern. Somehow the choice of "gasp!" seems weird. But I love the concept and the name :)
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being a silent movie fan myself..
i love this.. i would wear all week! |
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weird
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Very clever! 5.
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I like it, but not the font. It seems too modern somehow.
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I loooove the concept, and agree that a serif font would be better. I'm not sure about the text at all. There are so many great things that could be put there. The top-right color scheme, with the brown, works best with the old-timey feel IMO.
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5!!!! This is a really great idea!!!
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Love!!
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For some reason, this shirt reminds me of the "No, no,no - Yes, yes ,yes" scene from _Singing in the Rain_. Good stuff.
I like the choice of word. I'm a little concerned that the serif font might take things into the world of the spaghetti (sp?) western, but the quotation marks could be a little more flowery. 5... $5 with some refinement. |
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tracerbullet on Feb 26 '06 I experimented with some serif fonts, but I just didn't like how they were turning out, so that's why I stuck with this one. Thanks for all the comments so far.
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I also really like the concept, but not quite sure about the text itself.
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love the concept but definately no on the text
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maybe we can vote different types of text?
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Hahah! I LOVE silent films, so this shirt rocks hardcore. $5!
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RanaBanana: by "no on the text" do you mean font? because the shirt wouldn't really work without text, seeing as it's supposed to be a take on silent films.
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Heh. I like it.
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I would buy two of these. Very good.
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I feel this design would be greatly improved by adding some film scratches and general "grit" on top of the design, both by adding stuff and leaving blank spots through the design.
Yeah and a serif font would probably look good too. |
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mezo on Feb 28 '06 I like where this is going...but not where it is. Make use of the prior comments on adding more to your concept.
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I reallyREALLY like this shirt. Specially with that old timey frame around it. Genious, and adorable.
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How I wish this wasn't sold out yet! It would be awesome to wear to one of my jobs (video store). And it suits my love for movies.
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I like it! Glad it came back!
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Grats on the win! I think this is great.
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I bought this shirt today!
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gaspO
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I have a raging need to know what your other idea was. Please please please tell me before I explode.
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tracerbullet on Aug 26 '08 umm i have no idea. this was a long time ago, sorry. have fun exploding, though!
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Curses! My submission shall be foiled again! You shall rue the day!
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I want this to reprint so bad... I NEED ONE!
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once again ... I NEED ONE OF THESE!!!
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I have an icon of this...
Love it. I would buy it. Too bad I'm three years too late. REPRINT! |
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I'll buy one if you print it.
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three years later? wow!!! i need to get on the ball. i like the shirt. the silent film look is what i find funny.
it's original. i wou'd've thought of it myself at some point. me likey. nice workz. i agree with AllisonInvisible. REPRINT! |
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