Threadless T-Shirts - a new challenge

a new challenge by yoshi andrian

Scoring finished:

956 days ago

Submitted on:

Feb 21 '06

Scored by:

2,268 people

Comments:

18 comments

Final average score:

1.88 out of 5

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by yoshi andrian

Quest of self-discovery…
He has tired of his day job and tries to find more challenges..

djphonic on Feb 21 '06

Love the concept, although i don't like the illustration of the wall of scenery. Could have done so much more with that idea...

phones on Feb 21 '06

"did i once talk a depressed man down from a wall? Yes but it wasn't that high...and he wasn't that depressed"

tHoRNed on Feb 21 '06

the clouds are sort of distracting, but besides that it's pretty cool

Dan-O on Feb 21 '06

The dummy looks great, the wall looks like MS Paint...
Love the idea.

MadMerlin on Feb 21 '06

don't overlap the clouds with the figure, but still 5$

LaBing on Feb 21 '06

The clouds like kind of like wings to me, at least at first. Maybe leave the clouds out or don't have them go behind the dummy.

mynameisnette on Feb 21 '06

this reminds me of a claymation short.

pretty cool.

kamisch42 on Feb 21 '06

Clouds are definitely screwing with your image, and the wall just seems too...heavy. Something else he can jump off of? Maybe something a little higher, which we can TELL is higher anyway?

Moçambique on Feb 22 '06

i agree with diphonic....

xbigxox on Feb 22 '06

yeah at first i thought the clouds were wings .. but i still love it!

llama_lover on Feb 22 '06

Haha.

Olympic Smoker on Feb 23 '06

placement maybe, i really like the design graphic though

CFD

Sick Osiris on Feb 23 '06

nice illustration but i dont think it would be something i'd wear

Pophug on Feb 25 '06

Like kamisch42 said; maybe a angled top view of a skyscraper? and a bird instead of clouds? I'm just suggesting, it is your design after all!
And how is it a new challenge for the dummy?
The circles can be easily mistaken for eyes .

modelcitizen on Feb 25 '06

Out of the three shirt colours, the design looks best on blue. Nothing much more to add to the above comments, except that it makes me sad :(

cottageboy on Feb 26 '06

I thought the clouds were wings and it was an Icarus shirt, then i saw the Crash Test Dummy.. LOL