That Poem Shirt
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Submitted on:
Feb 20 '06
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45 comments
Average score:
1.68 from 2,370 votes
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Slick, man
Leverage the brand |
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nice.
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Lower left of shirt FOR SURE
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yeah, bottom left.
Good colour choice |
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Last line is horrific.
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Wow. Ummm.. no.
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poem = 0
overall look 4 i'll give it a 4 because i think it looks very nice love the text |
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adam antium on Feb 20 '06 nice!
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i agree with acanthus
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That horrible Less and More pun cost you at least 3 points.
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Cool but needs a drastic change of font...
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Pretty lame rhymes.
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atroscious poetry, but cool design... 2$
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I like it. A little difficult to read, but maybe that's just this crappy college computer screen.
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i agree with ductapecrazy
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keep the text but get rid of the background ornament it does nothing for the type...
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Love the type, hate the poem. I don't think I could wear anything that says "threadless" on the front - isn't the point that there is no brand name? I think your poem might even mention that. I really like the way it looks though - I'd give it a $4 for design...please try it with another poem!
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poem=0
idea=2378071823 |
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Awww, that's really sweet. :)
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Awesome :)
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Poems suck.
I was going to give this a 5 before I read the poem. Now it's a 0. |
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See...if you have to re-write it in order for us to be able to read it, then no, it shoudn't be on a shirt. Other thatn that, it LOOKS good...it's just not practical.
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I'd def. wear it if it was on the side, not on the chest.
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bananaphone on Feb 21 '06 .... attention
FUCK NO. Stop kissing ass and think of a DECENT tshirt idea. |
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Wow... that's worse than an entry-level poetry class. Please, for the love of creative language, nix this.
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blah... no one is going to be able to read this on a shirt without having to stop you and read it. then ask you what does this mean.
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design is awesome. poem sucks.
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Holy crap, that is a ridiculously bad poem. If poetry majors could beat people up, then my friends would beat me up for wearing this. Since they cannot, they would laugh at me instead.
The design is damn good, though. It makes me feel a little guilty for giving a 0. Which I did anyway. 0 |
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staffell on Feb 21 '06 hmmm, i think there are some bad comments on here! bollocks to them.
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wow, so I like squinted for 10 min. trying to read the shirt and then I scrolled down and felt like an idiot cause it was typed out right there! I agree that the whole point of threadless is the no brand thing... and I don't really like the poem so much but the design is awesome...I'm torn!! Do I vote on design...or literature? Maybe I vote skip submission without scoring.....
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so lame. so lame that while i read it i actually cringed.
ick. no. |
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whos gonna want to stop you and reads your paragraph-of-a-shirt
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Go for the offset text. Definately interesting, I like it.
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you've got shit on your nose from sticking it so far up threadless's ass
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i dig the look but i'm not all about threadless propaganda, because I like the whole...non brand of it all...but whatever.
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Nice overall look, the lower placement is great, but I've got to agree with everyone else that it's quite horrific poetry.
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everyone needs to chill the fuck out...i didnt make this shirt to "suck up" to threadless...i've been on threadless for a little while then most of you people that leave all these rude comments...and i dont need to suck up to anyone
but..thanks for the criticizm though...i loveeee it! :) it makes me know what not to do for next subs. |
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mezo on Feb 24 '06 Silly poem...but it looks nice all together.
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i dont know anybody who wants to be a walking advertisement for threadless by wearing a poem about it.if you are gonna be a walking ad, wear a good threadless DESIGN.
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asher27 on Feb 25 '06 i like the overall look, but the rhymes are a bit elementary. its definitely different though, and i like that. the only thing im not fond of besides the overall rhyme is the color of the graphic behind it... if it was completely desaturated (has this odd yellow tinge to it on my computer) it would look a hell of a lot better.
and definitely the lower left.... 3 |
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the poem's not that bad... like the design though.
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cool look, but i you've got a bit of chocolate or something on your nose.
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Design is good, but that rhyme is wack.
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Agreed.
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