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I found it hard to read the word
MORNING in the design. All the oranges and brown seem to suggest a sunset scene. Maybe yellow and more blue would help. |
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is this a reference to Pride of Arabia coffee? Because the packaging to THAT is alot similar to THIS!!!
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Clean graphic, lookin' good on a white tee. Finally, a submission that didn't come from Amateur Hour! If I see one more Clip Art-quality design...
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Mmmmm...coffee lovers should love this...like how you designed "morning paradise". Great color scheme. My friend Lisa said she'd buy (caffeine addict). $$
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cut the text...i think it works without it...i agree with the suggestion to make the colors more 'morning' oriented
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I love the cleverness of the design. Like how the space between the letters makes the tree... negative space and all that.
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looks like something that'd be for sale at Bad Ass Coffee Co. or something.
It's good, just not really my style I guess. |
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nice, i love jamaica, but, without the title of the shirt, you loose that it's jamaica. but i like it none the less.
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I like the idea behind it OK, but the graphic itself just looks like something you'd find at Old Navy. It's trying to hard, or something.
Maybe it's because I don't drink coffee. *shrug* |
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creepy in a starbucks way, sad I relate the idea of coffee carriers to starbucks, though perception is the rule.
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No time for stressin', no time for restin'
No time for waitin', I'm back to computatin'
With the first sip I be takin', my stress back to fadin'
On what you might call my morning paradise in Jamaican.