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if someone was running with a balloon it would not be in front of them, might want to consider that. otherwise i really like idea and the design
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i like the red.. but i wouldn't mind other colors.. but if you do use a different color i still think it should be semi bold.. this is really cool.
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Oh, and the line of the cliff should stop at the edge of the horizontal box line thingy, like it does at the top.
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"Dreams" is a little too dramatic and it's harsh color draw too much interest to it. Lighten it a little bit.
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Great idea. I don't really like the red, I think it may contrast _too_ much. Maybe something a little lighter? :]
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