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towgi
About my design
by towgi
First sub. Just learning how to tool around in photoshop. Any and all suggestions are welcome.
consuela
consuela on Feb 14 '06
there's my towg.
you know what i gave it. $5.
towgi
towgi on Feb 14 '06
pshhh it's looks like crap compared to everyone elses. this is the first time i've ever messed around with art programs. this is why i sorta contacted you...for some direction with ps and ill.
knittykitty
knittykitty on Feb 14 '06
I love it!!! Different colors would be awesome, I'm a little tired of out of the crayon box blue. But I would sooooooooooooooooo buy this shirt!!! $5
kirstenlovesdinner
kirstenlovesdinner on Feb 14 '06
the song is better.
cocoabunny19
cocoabunny19 on Feb 14 '06
they're both better than you, kristen.
i like the branches a lot, but i'm not sure the bird looks clearly like it's taking off or landing..
HippieSunrise31
HippieSunrise31 on Feb 14 '06
great song.
this is alright.
cruelix
cruelix on Feb 14 '06
i like it
white bird though? not black. there are too many black birds/bats/etc. on these tees already
Aerros
Aerros on Feb 15 '06
The bird is poorly placed on the branches, otherwise a sweet looking shirt,
lethologica
lethologica on Feb 15 '06
i hope the bird on the shirt isnt as unantialiased as the one in the pic.
2 because it's not very well drawn and screams 'basic' to me, but +1 for consuela. :P
agent99
agent99 on Feb 16 '06
I'm impressed if this is your first time in Photoshop!

It's not terrible. In fact, it's better than a lot of stuff that gets submitted. I like the branches and the placement, but I think I would like it more if the bird were white instead of black. Just to make it stand out.

Keep trying & good luck!
I_heart_ducks
I_heart_ducks on Feb 16 '06
Try some different colors like pink on maroon or white on black. Blue seems so limited with this one.
rudezude
rudezude on Feb 16 '06
i would totally buy this if the bird was white
SeraphNoctum
SeraphNoctum on Feb 17 '06
Yeah I like hte white bird better
2 days later
layingblames
layingblames on Feb 20 '06
this reminds me of the "when doves cry" video. it's kinda eh, but nice looking start.
Dopplershift
Dopplershift on Feb 20 '06
I think the bird's tail should go behind the branch so that it looks more natural.
chuckhollywood
chuckhollywood on Feb 20 '06
I LOVE IT.
5$
mezo
   mezo on Feb 20 '06
Yes, not bad First Timer.

Your execution isn't bad; just could use tweaking. The bird, for instance, is pretty pixelated (blocky, fuzzy).

The concept, however, is lacking.

Just keep practicing!
iheartmap23
iheartmap23 on Feb 20 '06
i think i rather like this one $; i dont mind the bird as black actually
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