My other two submissions didn't go down too well, so I'm hoping that this one will fare slightly better.

Any crit is encouraged. Hope you enjoy it.

Thanks! :)

Matt

maybe if the mail slot had a little flap on it, on the inside of the door.

whoa i totally thought that that was a pile of leaves or a bush. and a cop holding a gun horizontally.. i'm dumb.

I thought it was a bush.... maybe have a giant pile of mail that heaps near the door and slopes/spills away? I lik ethe sentiment though

I like the idea and the mailman. The concept is unclear without reading the title. The brown line doesn't convey DOOR well enough. 3, 5 if improved.

Thanks. How can I ammend it though? There isn't an edit button and resubmitting it will count as a duplicate. Hmmm.

i thought it was a pile of leaves too.

I agree that it needs improvement, but it is a very snazzy concept. Keep it up. 3.

my biggest problem is that the pile doesn't make sense, it wouldn't be shaped like that if everything's coming through the shoot.

Doesn't the mailman smell the dead guy inside?

add more dimension and make the pile look more realistic (ie have the climax just under the door slot and have larger letters, theyre too small compared to the mail man) give the mail man a bigger bag and maybe a few postal logos on his uniform? maybe make his torso come down lower, he seems like he has real long legs or a really short jacket on and show the door/slot/wall better

sorry that was alot, but its just alot of little tweeking things that would make it look so awesome, i hope to see it revised soon! its a real cool idea

and his arm sliding the letter in looks kinda funky, its too strait and comes out of his body sorta high, i noticed that as i scrolled back up to rate it, haha sorry.

I think you should just add a line for the floor, back wall, and triangle for the roof so it will actually look like a house and people will get it faster. I didn't get what he was doing at first but if you fixed it up i'd buy this in a second.

You should put a dead guy laying straight across the floor behind the pile. It would add a level of irony to it.

yeah, haha, or UNDER the pile, like just and arm or something.
this is coll. work on it some more and def. resubmit.

they dont look like postcards