The cold impersonal reality of steel and concrete are softened by the cool, peaceful effect of an environment that mimics the way that nature clean\\\\\\\'s the earth\\\\\\\'s atmosphere.

Does that shirt color exist?

There is no apostrophe in the word 'cleans'. The Grammatic Avenger strikes again!

It should be "is" softened, too. As you've written it, it's referring to the word "reality," which is singular.

crraaaaaap, i would so wear that if it didn't say "clean's"!!!!! WTF

The grammar is easily fixed...so I'll score as if it were correct.

good eye, redsugar

The picture looks cool but the words aren't verry clear.

Okay people, it is a direct quote from a book about houseplants. Chill, I can fix it for the final. Or grade this low and I will RE-DO it for you all, or score it well and I will FIX it before/if it ever gets printed... cool?

Reminds me alot of the grass nutrition design... not saying yours doesnt hold its own.. but with all the recent earth love prints i think im getting alittle shirted out on them.

I had a plant like that...it was named Ruri...when I moved...ruri the cactus died of dehydration X____X

fix the grammar, and it's kinda busy/a bit much to read....but cool concept, i dunno if i'd wear, but i know someone would, $4

Very Asian looking, me thinks.

IMHO, I would definitely shrink the plant and eliminate the text. Try to let the picture speak for itself. Maybe by adding a contrasting but subtle backdrop for the plant (an impersonal concrete-looking backdrop that the cactus is visually softening).

T

i'm sorry... i'm still weeping for ruri.

very feng shui, pity there's no shirt in that particular green.

Great drawing. But i think that the type layout is not too good...

nice design... I'm not sure what you're trying to say as far as the concept goes.

could the type have been placed on the pot - but reduced down to the minimum, in terms of the message.

I am so glad we can all get over the grammatical errors in this shirt. There isn't a huge message hidden here, it is just the idea that nature and plants are good! :) Hug a plant today.

I love the lime green, maybe if they decide to print it I can conviince them to add that color shirt, I have a long sleeve shirt from J.Crew that is this EXACT green.