Scoring finished:
973 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 06 '06
Scored by:
2,485 people
Comments:
77 comments
Final average score:
2.85 out of 5
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Nice!
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funny
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5'd!
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Drawing needs work.
Shirt + concept is amazing!!!!!! Resubmit man - instant classic. |
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Any specific drawing change suggestions, I was going for the sparse airline safety pamplet look. Does it need more color, background?
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No more color. No background necessary. Your drawings themselves have to look better. More specifically, the airplane doesn't look realistic enough and use thinner lines on your guy. If the drawings are better, $5. 4 for now.
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It's nearly perfect.
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like airtoons.com!
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Oh, that's cool, haha.
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this is amazing.
$5 |
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I like it. A lot. Maybe a red stripe on the plane?
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I love the fact that the guy is wearing the shirt himself.
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needs to be drawn better-- if you're going to appropriate...
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hahha... you can do this concept better
5$ ... anyway |
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I agree the drawing is terrible but the concept is genius. Resubmit this.
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great! $5
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With minor corrections aforementioned, instant buy for me.
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i agreee resubmit and then itll be ahit
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HAHAHA! My god did this make me laugh!! Great job!!
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Love it lol... totally love it... 4$
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The thing is, this actually looks better than airline "in case of emergency" pamphlet drawings. Having spenta good part of my weekend studying said pamphlets, I'm pretty sure about this.
I love it. Clever, and good job. My only suggestion would be to make a simpler drawing (instead of a complex, sized down one) for the shirt the guy is wearing. |
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WARNING: Shirt will not bestow any super powers that do not already exist. Increased strength, speed or the sudden ability to fly while wearing shirt like a cape are purely coincidental.
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i love it! i don't think the drawing is terrible at all! it's based on those terribly-drawn airline pamphlets, and recreates the look almost perfectly. therefore in being badly drawn, it is deceptively WELL drawn!
fiver. |
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Hahha! You definitely won me over with the last panel and his HILARIOUS pose. I want it :-)
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like it as is, dont change a thing
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i want this
just brilliant!!! |
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refine it and you'll get my $5
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hahaha $5 (first one for awhile)
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Cool idea, awful design.
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i tihnk it would be better if you include the title as a caption somewhere.. just a suggestion. 5
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how come in the first scene the pane is nose down and in the last nose up?
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mmm?
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Love the idea, not so much the design.
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I love it. My only suggestion would be to make the fourth panel more action packed, y'know?
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I love the idea. The second drawing is strange. It doesn't look like he is really taking his shirt off.. it is awkward.
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i love this so much and have no idea why. $5
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This is what Threadless is about!
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remove the U shaped waves in the ocean and b perfect.. design looks fine, it looks jus like those emergency instructions they have in the plane
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Sweet!
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THAT IS AMAZING!! I LOVE YOU FOR DESIGNING THIS REDLOKI - I WANT IT NOW!! $5 $5 $5 If they don't print this I will cry
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AWWWWW! I love it! If they don't print it, form your own business! ;]
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this is great stuff, man. 5 for sure
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- how come in the first scene the pane is nose down and in the last nose up?
That's part of the joke! |
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totally wicked, and i'd buy for a super-hero boyfriend of mine.
the design is right-on, replicating the airline's safety pamphlets, that is so killer! the colors are beautiful. do not change a thing. i had to laugh so hard at the second panel, because it looks like he's about to "whip it out" and save the day with his willy. (boy was i disappointed to see panel three!) ha ha ha. i have a sewer mind. |
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The drawinfgs are fine and look comparable to an airline pamphlet!
I'd buy it but my only suggestion is to shrinkt he size fo teh guy in the final photo :/ |
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Hilarious!
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nice joke!
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I love that he's wearing the shirt he's on.
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i just don't like the u shapes in the waves. concept is GREAT
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i agree, if I do it again I will change the look of the water, drop the U's and make the top more uniform
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No capes!
that guy must be some kind of giant |
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clever! love it. i'd just keep all the lines the same thickness, maybe make the u-shaped waves into ww-shaped waves.
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wow i love it as is
$5 |
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i might like to see the plane slightly more realistic. i seem to recall teh water landing having passeneger windows etc.
other than that I LOVE IT. a freaking plus. |
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great concept, needs better drawing, maybe thicker lines for airplane. may be good to have slightly different pose in last panel to show its the t-shirt on his back. resubmit, i'd buy it
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Tonteau on Feb 10 '06 Good drawing, great T. 5!
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also some work on the water. softer perhaps?
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Great concept, any chance some of the artword will be redone?! $
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If given the chance I'd make a few changes, mostly to the water and maybe add a bit more detail to the plane.
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superfly
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The airplane drawing needs serious work. Everything else is awesome. Since it's clear you went back in and scaled things, I'd suggest you do as select all, and make all the outlines the same weight. That's what really kills the airline feel...the plane's lines are thin, the guy's lines are thick, and the guy holding the plane's lines are REALLY thin. The continuity will work wonders.
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It looks like the plane has regained control and is now flying away after he jumped? lol
Great. $5 |
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Me likey.
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Great idea! I'd buy it.
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very cool, looks like the lego man got all Humafied and saved the day.
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$5 as is.
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i agree with some people that the concept is amazing, but it definitely needs to be redrawn.
resubmit this. |
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PRINT IT!!
PRINT IT!! PRINT IT!! |
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it looks too cartoony, but it is such a funny idea! i love the idea
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killer. you've been fived.
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redraw+resubmit=print
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original
Buy'd |
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funny concept, but i think the design needs a little work.
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14 days later
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Not that anyone reads the comments on old suggestions but here's a version that I tweaked to fix some lingering problems I had with design.
http://www.duke.edu/~naf2/misc/capeshirt.jpg |
11 days later
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Artwork perfectly mimics actual onboard safety literature. Very nice.
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Update: Adam White
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