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Feb 08 '06
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2.34 from 2,351 votes
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pocket_penguin on Feb 08 '06 Wow, maybe it's just the Caulder fan in me, but I love this. I definitely like it best with white lines, and maybe on the navy?
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<3 it
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I like the dark grey with white lines, best.
It's a cool design already, but maybe have a couple of the elements slightly tilted on their thread? That'd be cool too. |
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LOVE THIS!!
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It is fab... but maybe the hole in the tree needs to be diminished a wee bit? Kinda the first thing the eye goes to... still a 5 tho.
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tracerbullet on Feb 08 '06 ^ I definitely agree about the tree hole. I didn't even notice how big it looked until you just pointed it out :-x
Entranced: I orginally tried tilting some of the elements, but it wasn't working how I wanted it to so I left it. It might be something I could go back and try to do. Thanks for the great feedback so far! |
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haha
this is funny. |
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Ahh, yeah, gotcha. :3
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I remember making those in 2nd grade with the different weather types. :D
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hehe... pretty neat idea 4
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like it, but it seems too...plain.
maybe a few more colors? |
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clever. but i agree, the hangings themselves need a little color.
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yes, colour is your friend!
so include your friend in this submission and ill give it a 5. |
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i really like the idea and word play but i think the mobile pieces could have some more detail or be a little more 3-D /have a more floaty quality
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idea = 5, execution = 1
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heeeeeee :)
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agree with somepoems
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tres bon. White lines mos def.
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don't like the blaring hole in the tree...otherwise- really good idea =D
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I want some tilting.
Like the idea, my first thought was of that frustratingly great game at vectorpark.com I don't think it needs colour. Overal. I like it. |
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similar idea
http://www.threadless.com/submission/60864/mobile i like that one better, better execution... not saying you ripped off. most likely never seen it. |
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Funny idea but among the worst drawings I've ever seen.
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tracerbullet on Feb 09 '06 ^I wasn't really going for artistic detail; rather it was supposed to be more of an elementary school type of thing like many people did when they were younger.
Thanks for all the feedback so far; the suggestions have been really helpful. |
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Ditto about the hole on the tree. otherwise, 5 :]
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Tree hole = bullseye of doom.
Awesome design overall though. |
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Aww, I used to make stuff like this!
I think I'd like it better if it just had the clouds and sun, though... |
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I love the design, but I can't see myself wearing it on a shirt.
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This is a very very good idea, but the drawing really needs more development. I don't know if you actually *did* this in MSPaint, but that's what it looks like. The idea won't sell if the image isn't visually compelling.
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haha
i used to make those all the time like it, 5 |
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Aw I think this is really cute! I would like it better if it was cartoonish though.
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You can still make it look as if a child made the mobile without it looking like the child did the *drawing*.
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love it
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love it cept for the "holes" in the mobile pieces being cutout in white and black...keep it a one color print, i like the simplicity, cept maybe make the shapes a little rounder
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tracerbullet on Feb 14 '06 ^not quite sure what you mean by "holes." It's a two color print, one color is the line work, the other color is the scotch tape holding the strings in place.
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